"Internment" chapter 6

Jan 12, 2006 18:28

Chapter six returns to lj with its hair combed and dialog smoothed.
Thanks methos_fan
Oh, and I have been negligent with the rating thing. Rated EP for excessive plotting.

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pat_t January 14 2006, 16:34:12 UTC
I finally had time to print this off and take it to work and read. What an interesting story! I'm enjoying it very much and look forward to the next chapter. Poor Methos

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adabsolutely January 14 2006, 22:35:30 UTC
Thanks, Pat, glad you're enjoying it. I think it is about two-thirds of the way done. When complete, beta'd, and rewritten I'll announce it on the yahoo lists and lj highlander communities. So please mention if you see howlers. There is some debate going about Methos getting the log to the top of the fence. I live in logging country and have seen guys lift logs, but Methos is not a muscle bound sorta guy. I may cheat a bit by leaving out exactly how high the fence is. I think the ramp would work. I guess what really counts is will the reader buy it?

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pat_t January 15 2006, 12:09:19 UTC
I didn't have any problem with the log *g*. But I know some people are very picky about such things. Still looking forward to the rest of this story. Thanks for posting

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Thanks adabsolutely January 16 2006, 07:03:09 UTC
Glad you're enjoying it.

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cyberducks January 16 2006, 02:29:53 UTC
This is an interesting premise! About Methos and the log - he is a scrappy, wiry guy, and they are often stronger than they look. Plus, he is highly motivated.

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"Im tougher than I look." adabsolutely January 16 2006, 07:19:41 UTC
Thanks, glad it interests you. Yeah, Methos is definitely tougher than he looks.

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