SPN Fic: A lone daffodil; Sam/Jess

[ada_c_eliana]

Title: A lone daffodil
Author: Ada
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Pilot
Characters: Sam/Jess
Disclaimer: I don't own nothin'
A/N: This is an attempt at a new style of writing discovered in my fiction writing class.  Forgive any rough edges, please.

Summary: Sam, Jess and the truth.

Comments

[ruby_jelly]

Congratulations! This is really well done! At first I resisted reading it because I thought, oh no - stream of consciousness writing!

But you really pulled it off!

I don't understand the punctuation "stuff", and I can't imagine trying to read it aloud, but who does anyway? I love the motivations, and heart-break, and strength you exposited, especially Jess's. How devastating, that Sam gains total clarity when away with Dean, but cannot, is sucked back, into that life. You've touched me with this first person insight into Sam. (Usually find first person too obvious to persist to the end with, you know?) Totally believable.

So, hey, well done!

[ada_c_eliana]

Thank you! I was experimenting and wasn't sure if I should post or not, but I figured, why not? And yeah, I wasn't sure what to do about punctuation, haha.

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reading!