Spirals - Part 1

[acolyte33]

Title: Spirals - Part 1
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to and including 'Secret Santa'
Summary: Cal is ready to move things forward, but Gillian isn't so sure.

Massive love to my betas, beatlejessie and alainnrois for fixing my weird errors. Thanks for the help, ladies!! Thanks for helping me through my various blocks beatlejessie!!!

Comments

[bevfank]

*major flails*
When you mentioned you were writing something new I knew it would be AWESOME!

The part that's sticking out to me the most at the moment is when he tells her she shouldn't drive in the weather and that she needs new tires. That's such a boyfriend/significant other thing to say. ^_^

EDIT: FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[acolyte33]

Thank you!!

It always make me happy when you enjoy my fics :)

[eglvm]

Squee! I loved it. I can see this happening.
The banter between them was so wonderful and funny.
I really enjoyed this. I'm going to "memory" it.

[acolyte33]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[acolyte33]

Welcome back! And thank you :D

[topaz_eyes]

So lovely! I'm glad you addressed Cal's feelings about being "back there" with Gillian--I so wanted to see that in the ep.

[acolyte33]

Yeah, I wished the show had addressed that bit. Silly show!

Thanks for reading :)

[wickedground]

wheeeeeee you're back ♥ Can't wait for part two (do you know already how many parts this story will have?). I love how playful you write them. I just can hear them in my head, saying those lines.

(some overlooked commas: "Night, Cal." He waited until she closed the door, then went to his own room.

"Well, if you'd swap spit with me the fun way, it wouldn't be so gross," and

"How did I raise such a cheeky child?" he asked, shaking his head.)

[acolyte33]

I fail at commas. I think I always shall! Thanks for the heads up!

I think there will end up being five parts, all about this long. I'm wrapping it all up now :)

Thank you!

[wickedground]

aww can't wait for the other four chapters :) you and her_pseudonyme are definitely my favourite authors in this fandom.

And btw I loved the making fun of Twatlight ^__^

[acolyte33]

Awww that's sweet, thank you :)

Sometimes you just have to poke the sparkly vampires, though I really didn't hate it as much as a lot of people seem too. Maybe because I never paid a dime to read them all.