"He's Got Bette Davis Eyes." PG-13. Dean/Castiel.

May 27, 2010 01:24

Title: He's Got Bette Davis Eyes
Fandom: Supernatural
Character(s)/Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Word Count: 2377
Rating: PG-13 for sensuality and a bit of language
Prompt: "Q" - Quiet
For: wandersfound @ Alphabet Meme
Disclaimer: Not mine!

-A/N: I'm not sure where this came from. Dean/Cas is like a drug.

He's Got Bette Davis Eyes )

misc.: prompt, character: castiel, genre: pre-romance, character: dean winchester, pairing: dean/castiel, genre: smut, fandom: supernatural, rating: pg-13, length: 1000-2500 words

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fate_incomplete May 27 2010, 13:06:34 UTC
I loved this, the pacing was perfect, there was something incrediably sexy about the sheer wanting of Dean and Cas. It was lovely.

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an_ardent_rain May 28 2010, 13:30:31 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. The "wanting" is what I love writing, so I'm glad that I captured it all right. :)

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aliassmith May 27 2010, 13:55:51 UTC
The build up plus Cas' unwitting sexiness was oh so very hot. Nicely done.

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an_ardent_rain May 28 2010, 13:31:15 UTC
Thank you so much! :) I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

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mulder200 May 27 2010, 15:14:50 UTC
So the more Castiel stared the more Dean stared back, and it got to the point where even in front of Sam they were eye-fucking pretty seriously.

This part had me rolling!

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an_ardent_rain May 28 2010, 13:31:35 UTC
Hee! XD I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the comment!

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an_ardent_rain May 28 2010, 13:43:02 UTC
YAY! ♥

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. ^^ I really like writing sexual tension, and I thought it would be hilarious if Dean got it into his head that Cas was making eyes at him. XD I mean, my original idea was
Dean:
*grab tie*
*shove Cas in closet*
*quiet him with mouth*
so I guess it's good this at least has some substance, ha ha.

Anyway, thank you for commenting! :D And again, I'm so glad you liked it.

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pyjamagurl May 27 2010, 22:03:56 UTC
I love this! I very much love the idea of Cas unwittingly driving Dean crazy with his staring, it's so adorable!

Fabulous! <3

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an_ardent_rain May 28 2010, 13:44:36 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Hee. Yeah, I love the idea of Dean going crazy and Cas not even noticing. XP

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