Merry Christmas sagedarkwoods!

[an_ardent_rain]

Title: Wonder
Character(s)/Pairing: River/Jayne; Jayne's POV
Prompt: Mysterious Ways -U2
Written For: sagedarkwoods, for my 25 Fics of Christmas. Hope ya like it!
Rating: PG
Word Count: 506
Disclaimer: Not mine!
-Author Notes: So I just wrote this, and I'm coming off a big dose of nyquil, so hopefully it's neither trippy nor exceedingly boring. Also, the idea

Comments

[willow_reece]

Awwww, that was so sweet! You do Jaynes voice really well.

An’ she could bend and twist like some kind o’ bendy… twister… well, sort o’ thing. << Favorite line ever. ♥ (Hee. I got first comment.=D)

[an_ardent_rain]

Hee. Thank you so much! :)

That made me laugh, too. It's always fun to write in Jayne-speak. He's so... Jayne. All spiky and adorable. Hee.

[sagedarkwoods]

I LOVED THIS! Thank you so much! You had me at the first line, and then had me in awe with Jayne's train of thought. I adored the "zombiefied bug" part, and then his attempt to lie to himself about how he still hated her, 'cept he didn't, and then his slight arrogance at the "swai an' shiny" bit. Awesome.

[an_ardent_rain]

Oh, I'm so glad you did! Yay. :D Yes, I did specifically pick that first line because it was sorta attention catching. Hee. I had fun writing in Jayne-speak so I'm really glad that I managed to make it believable.

Anyway, thanks so much for leaving a comment - and again, I'm so glad you liked it! Hee. :)

[idyllictorture]

You don't see many first person Rayne fics so this was a treat. I laughed when he said all women eventually realized how swai he was. Very funny and well written.

[an_ardent_rain]

Thanks very much for the comment! Hee. Yeah, not quite sure why I decided to go first person, but I'm glad it worked out all right. Jayne-speak is fun. Glad you found it funny, and thanks again! :)

[pladbelle_87]

*squee*

That was lovely!

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[an_ardent_rain]

Why thank you! :D

[cedelede]

"this time I was a little more invested in findin’ out." LOVE this line!