"Target Practice." Drabble. Rated G.

[an_ardent_rain]

Title: Target Practice
Fandom: Firefly
Character(s)/Pairing: Rayne
Prompt: Think, from firefly100
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Word Count: 100
-Author Notes: Yay Rayne! Just got this little idea, so had to write it really quickly. I'm wondering if it wouldn't be better to just throw out the word restriction and see what I could do with the idea if I expanded it

Comments

[gilove2dance]

*melts into a puddle of goo* This was steamy and absolutely GORGEOUS! How is your imagery so bloody amazing!? *bows down and grovels at your feet for more*

[an_ardent_rain]

*beams* Yay! Oh, you sure know how to make a writer happy! Thanks so much. :D I'm so glad you liked it! Hee. I do my best. And imagery is my favorite thing to write, so I guess it just appears in my writing a whole, whole lot. And no need for groveling! Hee - there will always be more Rayne from me!

And again, thank you so much! What a lovely comment. ^_^

[sunshineali]

Wow, for a drabble, in which both River and Jayne were fully clothed and not in the vicinity of a bedroom, this was VERY hot! (Please tell me it's a prequel to a saga of the threesome of Vera, Jayne and River.) :)Ali

[an_ardent_rain]

Thank you so much! :D

I'm glad it turned out hot - these are my favorite little bits to write, so it's always good when they turn out well! Hee. Ooh, there definitely could be more. Jayne, River and Vera is always fun.

Thanks again!

[pladbelle_87]

Can I say... AHHH!! ^___^ Holy Canoli!!

*melts*

[an_ardent_rain]

Hee. Thanks so much for the comment! Glad you liked. Heh heh. I do try. *beam* :D

[idyllictorture]

I love the atmosphere you creates with just a few words. I could practically smell Jayne. And you cut the tension with a knife. This was just perfect. I wouldn't change or add a single word.

[an_ardent_rain]

Ooh, thank you very much! I'm very flattered. Hee. I'm glad you liked it - drabbles are one of my favorite things to write so I think I'm getting better at the whole "saying more with less" thing. I do practice a lot. Heh.

Anyway, thanks again! I guess you're right, too - this does seem to say what I want it to. :)

[g_r_i_t_s23]

Wow!

Sensual and steamy too!

[an_ardent_rain]

Thanks so much for the comment.

That's what I was going for, so I'm very glad it worked out. :) Thanks for reading!