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turtle_goose September 7 2008, 21:16:18 UTC
These are all wonderful! Some of my favorites:

"Ten Little Moonbrains" was both darling and serious at the same time, with a nice touch of warmth. Not many can carry off that combination and you did it marvelously.

"A Worthy Trade" just about killed me! I love that Jayne would give up his most prized possessions for River, and him doing the 'noble' thing and leaving is just...GUH! I love angsty Rayne. :D

"Partners" is rather bittersweet. From the mentions of Zoe and her solo meant to be a duet, to the wondering that maybe on Jayne and River would come together because they're the only options left to each other...it's sorta hopeful but sad too.

I really, really loved these!

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an_ardent_rain September 8 2008, 03:09:05 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

I really liked "Ten Little Moonbrains"; I was afraid the concept wouldn't work for a drabble, but actually it turned out much better than I thought it would. I like that a lot myself.

Oh, I like a bit of angsty Rayne, too! (Though I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Heh.) I just wanted to write Jayne absolutely madly in love with her, and this is what came out.

I like the idea of a whole paired-off ship, and I think that's one reason Jayne and River could gravitate together. And I always enjoy a taste of bittersweet.

Thanks again for the feedback; I really appreciate it!

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willow_reece July 10 2009, 10:37:08 UTC
How have I not commented on this? I read these like months ago--they are all amazing.

I like A Worthy Trade. Of course I'm a bit of an angst junkie. =P

Ten Little Moonbrains; I absolutely LOVE this one. It is so beautifully written, the tempo is great.♥

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an_ardent_rain July 10 2009, 17:43:46 UTC
Hee. Thanks for the comment! Heh - I don't care about when at all; I just appreciate that you comment at all. :P Though I'm glad that someone actually read this! Heh.

Ooh, glad you liked that one so much! I was pretty proud of the idea. ^^

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