day 6 (i admit i cheated...)

Apr 07, 2009 06:36

Dragging my heart 'round the city
   trying to wear my body down
   looking for an escape route
   from this hollowness you left behind
I find myself following your trail
   your laughter leading the way
   our memories making up the path, but
   on a dead end I find myself, alas!
Leaving me no choice, I turn back around
   thinking, "You chose to go back in time...
   ...but it's okay" and made up my mind -
   the next train back home leaves at nine.

(Yeah. Yeah. I'm a day late. I just completed this a few moments ago but I jotted down some of those lines yesterday. Does this still count for my napowrimo challenge? Hmm. Also, the end result is a bit different from how I "envisioned" it at first, and I feel awkward about this, but oh well. I like the last line though. I wish there really is a train I can take that'll take me back home in a jiffy. *lesigh*) 

my own words, napowrimo.2009

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