...Love... - Part 8

Apr 23, 2010 17:02



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“Changmin, wait!” I heard the door slam behind me, running to the middle of the hallway to catch the elevator I think I saw Changmin slide into. My mind was running thousands of miles an hour, trying to repeat the conversation that had just taken place in our living room. I still couldn’t grasp it and even more, I ( Read more... )

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sassychicks April 24 2010, 05:48:51 UTC
I've read from the 1st chapter and now I'm dropping my comments. Sorry for not commenting earlier ^^

I would like to say that you describe the character very well. Almost real (I don't know TVXQ in person so I can't say)..seeing many interviews in various TV programs as well as reading mags interview, I think I'm also having the same assumption of the boys character. Yunho the hardworking one, the pillar of the group; JJ, the strong one despite his physical appearance; Junsu, the strong believer; Yoochun, the sensitive one and Changmin the snarky one. You describe them very well and your strong characterization made this story alive.

I like how you put a beautiful wordings despite there's so much controversy between religion and the homosexual things and not to mention the society as well. The dilemma that Junsu facing between his beliefs and the "family" is well written and I love to see the development of the story and how you will come up the ending as we all know, sometimes there's no happy ending but the best ending.

Looking forward to reading next chapter.

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achooseylover April 26 2010, 06:20:36 UTC
Thank you so much for these awesome comments! <3 <3 They're very much appreciated and I'm happy you're enjoying the fic!!!

It's funny that you mention that the personalities of the boys seem real and true to life, even though we don't know them very well personally. Since writing this story, In every interview and TV show I've watched of them, I'm starting to notice that some of the traits I put in the boys are actual traits they possess! It's really weird!! But I do believe this is how they would probably be if we really knew them. I just hope Changmin would be a bit nicer ^___^;;;;

The religion and homosexual topic was really something that I thought I might struggle with, but believing that Junsu is a kind man who has the peacemaker instinct in him, it really came quite naturally and I hope that it can be something we can all learn from.

As for the ending, a certain song has already inspired my ending and I believe it is quite fitting. I just cant rush it quite yet!! ^__^ I hope you enjoy the next one!!! <3 <3

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