I really love how you set up things in the past, when the battle between Alchemy and Magic first started. The details really helped flesh out how the world looked, with the Spring Festival teeming with life and happiness, the two playing chess in the library before sneaking off to practice magic in the castle, and Aeon being annoyed by the nosy chambermaids. Aeon seemed like such a sweet, kind boy and I just feel terrible for how his life went so wrong when he had the best of intentions. I know he was just trying to protect both of them when he decided not to change his friendship with Malachite into something more, and that he could sense something was terribly wrong with his friend, which is why he chose Alchemy for the King
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I really love how you set up things in the past, when the battle between Alchemy and Magic first started.
Thank you. I tried really hard to try to make the past feel real.
and Aeon being annoyed by the nosy chambermaids.
Nosy chambermaids are the worst chambermaids. Unfortunately, I think that's the only variety they come in. :D
But to end up being killed by someone he might have loved is just so terrible... and then he had to endure the same pain every time he was reincarnated...
I had to think of a reason for Aeon to have gone crazy if he was going to be Insano and Spoony, and so suddenly the reincarnation process was incredibly painful, which kind of makes sense if you think about it, and drove him insane. A side effect that Malachite didn't intend. But that's why we don't go around cursing people in anger, kids!
I did like the touch of having him come back as Spoony's characters, but I still felt awful for him.
LOL I couldn't resist doing that. I just love his characters a lot.
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Thank you. I tried really hard to try to make the past feel real.
and Aeon being annoyed by the nosy chambermaids.
Nosy chambermaids are the worst chambermaids. Unfortunately, I think that's the only variety they come in. :D
But to end up being killed by someone he might have loved is just so terrible... and then he had to endure the same pain every time he was reincarnated...
I had to think of a reason for Aeon to have gone crazy if he was going to be Insano and Spoony, and so suddenly the reincarnation process was incredibly painful, which kind of makes sense if you think about it, and drove him insane. A side effect that Malachite didn't intend. But that's why we don't go around cursing people in anger, kids!
I did like the touch of having him come back as Spoony's characters, but I still felt awful for him.
LOL I couldn't resist doing that. I just love his characters a lot.
You really made me glad that this didn't ( ... )
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