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accordingtomel

Fanfic - In the Eye of the Beholder

Nov 07, 2009 23:41

Title: In the Eye of the Beholder
Author: AccordingToMel
Summary: It wasn’t so much that Arthur didn’t want to hug Merlin as it was that he very much did.
Characters/Pairings: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: PG
Spoilers/Warnings: Coda to 2x06 - “Beauty and the Beast II”
Word Count: 3,707
Disclaimer: What fun I would have. Alas, they are not mine. Such ( Read more... )

merlin, fanfic

Comments 36

mootifulru November 8 2009, 06:40:44 UTC

AWESOME! I loved it. Thats totally what I saw throughout the whole episode. You write Arthur brilliantly. Congrats on a great fic :).

accordingtomel November 8 2009, 16:38:54 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. This episode was just begging for some extra interpretation and I'm glad you felt it reflected your own perspective as well! And thanks for the comment re: Arthur. That makes me happy to hear! Thank you once again :D

meredyth_13 November 8 2009, 09:17:03 UTC

Oh, this was lovely. A really crisp, authentic expansion on the episode. You filled in just enough of their individual thoughts and feelings to round it out just beautifully.

Well done. :D

accordingtomel November 8 2009, 16:40:12 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. After I saw the episode I thought there was no way I couldn't write fic for it! Thanks for your kind comments and I'm so glad that you enjoyed this :D

P.S. Love your icon! It's hilarious ;)

the_muppet November 8 2009, 09:36:13 UTC

Yep, that's totally how it really happened so very good job indeed =)

*hugs muchly*

accordingtomel November 8 2009, 16:41:21 UTC

I agree. This is essentially what happened. They just didn't have time to add their inner thoughts into the mix, LOL! ;) Anyway, thanks so much hon! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

*hugs* :D

batmanboxers November 8 2009, 11:54:50 UTC

This was really rather brilliant.

accordingtomel November 8 2009, 16:43:01 UTC

Why thank you! What an incredibly kind thing to say :D. I'm glad you enjoyed!

readthesubtext November 8 2009, 13:25:37 UTC

Glad to be of assistance, m'lady! I very much enjoyed my advance preview; you did a wonderful job of giving voice to Merlin and Arthur's internal dialogue and exploring everything that was left unspoken in the episode itself, and I think the fact that I could barely differentiate between the dialogue that was taken directly from the script and that of your own making is a sure sign that you've got it nailed! ;) I love your choice of title, too! :)

accordingtomel November 8 2009, 16:46:27 UTC

Thanks again for your wonderful beta job. Seriously, it was incredibly helpful and I really appreciated it!! :D

Also, the fact that you say you could barely differentiate between my original dialogue and script dialogue is actually one of the kindest compliments I've ever received! So thank you SO MUCH for that :D.

I love your choice of title, too! :)

Not kidding you, I sat there thinking for a good half an hour about what I wanted to call it ;). It was finished and ready to be posted, but I just needed a title!! I think it worked out okay in the end though :).

Thanks again, my friend!