SG-1 Fic: Illumination

Mar 26, 2008 10:22

Okay guys, this is it. No more burying little baby proto plot-Goa'ulds in my brain to sit there and stew in the background and then suddenly demand to be written. At least not until I finish the half-written long, plotty gen stories languishing on my hard drive.

Title: Illumination
Author: abyssinia4077
Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Characters: Sam/Jack/Daniel
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fic (type): ship, fic (type): longer fic, fic: all, fic (fandom): stargate sg1

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rydra_wong March 26 2008, 15:58:27 UTC
... wow.

You know, I am in awe of the fact that you can take a joke about glowing dildo porn and write something this rich and serious and multi-layered and wistful.

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abyssinia4077 March 26 2008, 19:05:17 UTC
It's all Daniel's fault. He takes things seriously and thinks too much. *nods*

Glad you liked it though :)

[I keep feeling back, when I write one of these, that Teal'c doesn't get to play too but...I SO have enough limbs and penises (real and fake) and everything else already]

Thank you!

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abyssinia4077 March 26 2008, 19:08:45 UTC
I don't know how I pull it off either. I just let it sit in my brain for a while and eventually something coalesces into something I can write (though maybe it's because I have trouble pairing any of them off - my brain always says "but, but...other person!")

Yeah, actually, the Jack here is the hardest for me - of the three he's the one I see being the least comfortable with all of this - both the non-vanilla sexual interactions and the letting people get that close inside so I definitely have to twist him more for it to work at all. I think he still has a lot of moments of freaking out and having to just step back, but when Sam and Daniel come at him together, he's never going to be able to say no.

Anyway, very glad to hear you liked it. Thanks so much!

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vipersweb March 26 2008, 16:50:16 UTC
nice introspective piece wrapped up in porn.

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abyssinia4077 March 26 2008, 19:09:03 UTC
Thanks!

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zats_clear March 26 2008, 17:35:11 UTC
good lord, woman. if this is what they were doing in your head on your way home, it is a wonder you did not run off the road!

hot porn with brains and a heart. very nice

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abyssinia4077 March 26 2008, 19:10:57 UTC
Well, it was this image:

Daniel's hands are locked around his elbows, forehead on his forearms, and hips high in the air as Sam slowly pushes inside

that was in my head (and, yes, not driving off the road was a good thing) and then I had to let it sit there for a while and percolate until it could unpack itself and let me know what on Earth was going on to get them like this.

The brain is totally the biggest sexual organ - can't have porn without it :)

Glad you enjoyed it - thank you!

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abyssinia4077 March 26 2008, 19:19:15 UTC
*sends you crazy glue for brain repair*

There's a fic somewhere, and I can't remember which one, with a quote that, I think is something Sam is thinking, along the lines of "Daniel has always been leaving" and it's so true. I have this theory in my head that he's had so many people leave him over the years that he's hit the point where he pre-emptively leaves before they can. And I think he can't promise not to leave them again because deep down, he's probably going to leave them first (though I'm not sure that any of this is conscious thought on his part)

Glad you enjoyed it though! Thanks!
(now, can I please get free of Daniel effing Jackson's head?)

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abyssinia4077 March 27 2008, 01:13:00 UTC
Yep. Daniel seems to deal with people in 3 ways - either fighting hard to do everything he can to keep them from leaving (or get them back) or not letting them get close so when they leave it won't matter or leaving them before they can leave him. *hugs poor, broken boy*
(honestly, and I know nearly nothing about psychology, but I'm guessing there are aspects to his emotional maturity that just stopped developing around age 8)

And the thing with the Ascension - yes he's bitter at the Ancients (more later than in the timescale where this fic is set) but I don't think he regrets it. Once he's made a decision, that's the right one and....he isn't sorry for doing it, even if it hurt them (he's sorry it hurt them, but individuals are less important in the grand scheme of the universe)

That depends. Have you finished the sequel to "Eroding Away the Mountains" yet? :)

Nope! but that's inside Sam's head, so it's okay :)

(I'm ignoring that my other big WiP is not only inside Daniel effing Jackson's head but is inside it With A Tok'ra)(

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