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SG-1 Fic: Scattered Shards (gateverse_remix)

Jun 30, 2007 23:25

Title: Scattered Shards
Author: abyssinia4077
Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Characters Daniel Jackson, Sam Carter, Jack O'Neill, Teal'c (real and Moebius!verse versions)
Rating/Warning Gen, PG-13, canon character death, spoilers for Moebius
Disclaimer: The Stargate universe and characters belong to MGM and many others, none of whom are me.
Word Count: 2528
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fic (type): challenges, fic (type): gen, fic (type): longer fic, fic: all, fic (fandom): stargate sg1

Comments 41

dknightshade July 1 2007, 13:22:00 UTC

*grins* Be getting back to you after I watch the second half of Moebius.

abyssinia4077 July 1 2007, 14:20:21 UTC

Hee :) Perfect timing (almost) this time, eh?

But run! Close your eyes! Don't spoil yourself more than you probably already are.
and have fun!

dknightshade July 3 2007, 02:40:54 UTC

Poor Daniel. It would be hard to lose his friends of course, but I didn't really think about the fact that it would be harder to get them back - but not quite.

Beautifully written, as always. And very sad. I did like that he decided to tell them his stories in the end though.

flaying him to within an inch of his life

*cringes* Ouch! Poor Teal'c.

abyssinia4077 July 3 2007, 03:35:27 UTC

I still think Moebius may be one of the cruelest things to ever happen to Daniel - leaving him stranded in ancient Egypt and killing off his team and then giving them back wrong.

I'm glad you liked it, especially the end. I couldn't resist that bit of hope and acceptance somehow.

And, yeah, I owe Teal'c lots of apologies or chocolate or candles or something (not that I was exactly nice to Jack or Sam....)

Thanks!

rydra_wong July 1 2007, 13:47:34 UTC

Oh. Ow. Ouchy and gorgeous.

abyssinia4077 July 1 2007, 14:21:08 UTC

Yeah, not exactly Daniel's happy place, but I couldn't resist that edge of hope/acceptance at the end.

Thanks!

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abyssinia4077 July 1 2007, 18:51:14 UTC

Thanks! I'm really glad to hear it worked for you and that both teams came across well.

beanpot July 2 2007, 13:54:38 UTC

Oh - that was painful and *good*. I still don't quite get the whole episode (the whole making my brain explode) but this fleshes it out nicely into something I can grasp.

abyssinia4077 July 2 2007, 22:18:03 UTC

Thanks! I hope it wasn't too painful - I couldn't resist that glimmer of hope at the end.

I still don't get Moebius either - I watched it several times while writing this, talked about it with people, read fics that explained it, and it still doesn't make any sense if you think about it too hard.
Glad to hear this helped though, and I'm glad you liked it.

thanks for commenting.

aurora_novarum July 2 2007, 17:15:30 UTC

I couldn't resist skimming through on this latest brief internet foray. OMG, all the poignant parts still get to me, and I love the additions and changes you've made to it.

Great job! :-)

abyssinia4077 July 2 2007, 22:18:55 UTC

AURORA!
*glomps you. gently*
So nice to see you poking around these parts.

Glad you like it still and thanks so much for the beta and talking it over with me - helped a ton.