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Fic - The Lies We Tell Ourselves (Lincoln/Jane) R, 1/1

Oct 13, 2007 17:46

Title: The Lies We Tell Ourselves
Summary: Sometimes, the lies we tell ourselves are the hardest ones to believe.
Rating: R (mature situations, language)
Author's Notes: 1,020 words. Veers off into AU land after 2x10. Big thanks to domfangirl for the beta. Concrit/feedback always appreciated and welcome! Enjoy!
( A week later and her lip still splits open every time she even thinks about cracking a smile. )

pairing: jane phillips/lincoln burrows, fic: prison break, character: jane phillips, !fic, rating: r

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happywriter06 October 14 2007, 20:32:51 UTC

What msgenevieve said. I'm even going to use the same icon. This is how I would imagine it to be if L/J ever got together for the first time.

The entire piece is wonderful but my favorite part is here: Lincoln’s hand reaches up and palms her face, softly, gently, such a sharp, glaring contrast to the fast, hard movement of their bodies. He wipes at her sweat-sheened face delicately and it is everything and nothing at once and it leaves Jane wanting. She moves away from his touch as if stung.

A long drug out moment of painful silence, of confusion, followed by a hard, open mouthed, bruising kiss. Jane’s lip finally splits open, the bitter copper taste and slight discomfort mixing with the almost sweet essence of them and it serves as another reminder of what this is and what this is not.
It sums perfectly the theme of the entire piece. This is a favorite.

I love it when people writer L/J.

abvj October 15 2007, 15:52:22 UTC

oh, wow. Thank you! I love feedback like this and I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this. Hope you don't mind, but I added you as a friend -- we have A LOT of the same friends, fandom, and interests in common and I think we'd get along well.

happywriter06 October 16 2007, 03:31:07 UTC

Always happy to meet a new friend.

abvj October 16 2007, 04:50:14 UTC

Yay! I love your icon by the way :)

happywriter06 October 16 2007, 23:36:47 UTC

It's not by me though. It's of the actress that played Jane when she was on a show called Drive. I love it. Since there's so few Jane pics, I take what I can get.

abvj October 17 2007, 00:48:49 UTC

Kristin Lehman is beautiful anyway. She was on Judging Amy season five, and that's when I fell in love with her, but Judging Amy icons are always few and far between... :(

happywriter06 October 20 2007, 16:32:09 UTC

I first saw on PB and I've been loving her ever since. I found this pic of her as her character on Drive:

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