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Fic - Equilibrium (Donna/Harvey) R, 1/1

Sep 10, 2012 21:14

Title: Equilibrium
Summary: Early morning breathes familiarity. Or, the one with sexy shenanigans. Whichever you would prefer. There is a smidge of plot, but blink and you may miss it.
Rating: hard r
Author's Notes: 1,878 words. General series spoilers. Set in the same universe as take your cues but you don't necessarily need to have read that for ( Read more... )

character: harvey specter, fic: suits, !fic, pairing: donna paulsen/harvey specter, rating: r

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lapiccolina September 11 2012, 01:43:13 UTC

Hee hee heeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

abvj September 11 2012, 01:49:25 UTC

:)

WHAT TO WRITE NEXT? I need ideas!

lapiccolina September 11 2012, 01:57:30 UTC

How about kid fic. It doesn't have to be about their kid - but interaction with kids.

OMG, I want a kid run - mock trial with Harvey as judge!!!

I feel like Harvey wouldn't be as smooth with kids. Like kids would call him out on everything. And Donna would just enjoy that so much.

phrenitis September 11 2012, 03:24:09 UTC

KID FIC! SECONDED!

Also, you should write two versions. *nods*

Because I so want to see a scene where Harvey is the one who is adorable and charming with kids because he has movie quotes and albums and sports paraphernalia, and he's totally the one who came up with the ridiculous can opener bit (although it's Donna who suggested the actual can opener) because he's a kid at heart, and Donna comes in and the office is a mess and she's all OMG WHAT IS HAPPENING because they both really love that office, but of course he's never the one actually setting it up thank you very much, not to mention why in the world are there marker drawings all over the glass wall? and is she mistaken or do some of them look like the doodles Harvey occasionally jots down in the margins of his notes?

(the meta for these two is endless)

lapiccolina September 11 2012, 04:57:56 UTC

Write this!!!

abvj September 13 2012, 17:35:53 UTC

OR: the one where he somehow ends up spending Halloween with her (details up to the writer) and it turns out that she spends it with her nieces and nephews, dressing up and everything, and Donna is completely blindsided by how awesome Harvey is with them, and by the end of the night they're teaching her nephew how to properly throw a baseball because Donna's brother in law isn't into sports and Donna's sister simply doesn't care for sports after a childhood of having them forced upon her, and Donna isn't around enough to pass all her knowledge on because of her selfish boss... so it all gets condensed into one evening of playing catch at twilight, Harvey half in his suit with the sleeves rolled up to his elbows and Donna in some sort of costume, totally in character as she slides into their makeshift first base because it doesn't matter if she's playing against a six year old, she plays to win.

ALSO: when/if I write my own baby!fic, their first kid is going to be a boy, not a girl. First name undecided, but it will not be Gordon, ( ... )

lapiccolina September 15 2012, 07:02:23 UTC

AMAZEBALLS.

COMPLETELY AMAZEBALLS.

Both fics DEMAND TO BE WRITTEN! What can I do to make that happen?!? Don't ask me to write fic. Not that I haven't written fic before, but I've only written General Hospital fluff that's so saccharine, you may need a few trips to the dentist. My talents in the arts lean towards music (piano and violin) and photography (seriously, I take a really good photo, lol)! I'm willing to read all drafts and be someone you can bounce ideas off of! :)

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abvj September 16 2012, 20:23:12 UTC

CONSIDER IT GIFTED TO YOU.

just_liv September 11 2012, 03:20:29 UTC

I know nobody asked me but can I just say: jealous!Harvey and hope for the best? Like, in this universe their relationship still remains a secret (even if just barely) so what if there was a client who took a special interest in Donna and wasn't afraid to show it? Sure she would never let things go on, unleass Harvey was being too smug about it, because in that case, she'd probably do it just for fun and to see how long would it take for him to break. Okay, too many ideas. Feel free to use them all - or neither, just make sure to keep writing, that's all I ask. And btw, this one was a pleasure to read, as expected.

abvj September 13 2012, 17:40:59 UTC

I LOVE THAT TROPE SO MUCH. Sure it's overdone, but when it is done well it is magnificent. And you know, just because Donna is with Harvey, she would still welcome any and all attention - to a point. And she would tell them that, too. She would be like, I'm Donna, I'm awesome, and damn straight people should admire that. And Harvey would be like, yeah, you've got a point, but can you not indulge in it so much? And she would do it just to spite him and he would know that, but still it would kind of piss him off because Harvey missed the sharing lesson in kindergarten, and they would end up finally telling people by him sauntering up between her and that guy from the DA's office that has always had a thing for her and Donna used have a thing for back in the day, and putting his arm around her waist in the most possessive way ever, and no one at the firm would be surprised AT ALL because it is so obvious that these two are MEANT TO BE (and besides: Mike started an office pool the moment he noticed Harvey acting weird, and everyone has ( ... )

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