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Fic - the cold comfort of the in-between (Donna/Harvey) nc-17, 1/1

Aug 28, 2012 18:37

Title: the cold comfort of the in-between
Summary: The other time. It is just as complicated as one would think.
Rating: hard r/nc-17
Author's Notes: 3,986 words. You had to know this was coming! General series spoilers. Set pre-series, obviously. All mistakes are mine. These characters, however, are not. Con-crit is both welcome and appreciated, and ( Read more... )

fic: suits, character: donna paulsen, !fic, pairing: donna paulsen/harvey specter, rating: nc-17

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tidbit2008 August 29 2012, 03:09:21 UTC

THESE TWO. OMG. Guhhhhhhhhh. This is so perfectly frustratingly them. I think I love them in his childhood bedroom most of all. Quiet moments, hands, that kind of stuff always gets to me. But all of this is seriously good. Your details ring really true. Like -

the sight of his bare feet against the tile of her kitchen floor, the way his hair sticks every which way.

There's something about this mental image that just works so well. I can see it, from comfortable to freak out in perfectly synchronized 10 seconds flat. Sigh.

Love this ♥

abvj August 29 2012, 22:12:05 UTC

THANK YOU! So glad you liked this. And even more glad that those details about the morning after worked for you! I can just see Donna being all business like and casual because in her head it's just sex, but then she sees him all messy and unkempt which is so unlike Harvey and it just floors her.

UGH. THESE TWO. I want all the fic, all the time. I think we should start a campaign.

tidbit2008 August 29 2012, 23:02:33 UTC

I think it's something about his hair going everywhere that is such a boy thing, and not at all how she's used to seeing Harvey. He's this hot shot lawyer and her boss, but I feel like he looks like a ten year old with bedhead.

Saaame. I think I wrote baby fic today? Cause I'm crazy? meeeeep.

abvj August 29 2012, 23:09:37 UTC

STOP THE PRESS:

Saaame. I think I wrote baby fic today? Cause I'm crazy? meeeeep.

WITH HARVEY/DONNA??? CAN I HAVE THAT, LIKE, RIGHT THIS SECOND????

tidbit2008 August 29 2012, 23:21:26 UTC

Lolol. It's not much (750~ words) and it still needs to be beta'd, or at least looked over.. but if you're volunteering, I can email it to you ;)

abvj August 30 2012, 01:23:19 UTC

um. yes. I can't get to it tonight, but I can definitely get it back to you in the next couple of days! If you're interested, PM me.

tidbit2008 August 30 2012, 02:18:22 UTC

Aw, thanks! But I actually wound up bugging spyglass_, lol. Fic should hopefully go up in the next couple of days :)

abvj August 31 2012, 20:13:29 UTC

Yay! I can't wait to read it!!!!

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