Comments | abvj: Fic - For Those Who Try Again (Fiona, Jesse/Fiona) R, 1/1

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Fic - For Those Who Try Again (Fiona, Jesse/Fiona) R, 1/1

Feb 02, 2011 00:11

Title: For Those Who Try Again
Summary: Things, as it turns out, don't change all that much after. Everything is just a means to an end.
Rating: r
Author's Notes: 1,866 words. Spoilers for everything up to date. Set after 4x18 Last Stand. All mistakes are mine. These characters, however, are not.

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pairing: fiona glenanne/jesse porter, challenge: porn battle, pairing: fiona glenanne/michael westen, !fic, fic: burn notice, character: fiona glenanne, rating: r

Comments 24

pbeeslysweater February 2 2011, 04:50:08 UTC

Wow. This is so powerful and so very lovely. I have wondered what would happen to them all if Michael never came back someday, and I think you've nailed it here. There's such a sad acceptance that is just so perfect. Fantastic!
Thanks for posting! I'm always craving good burn notice fic!

abvj February 3 2011, 02:19:47 UTC

Thank-you! I'm so glad that this worked for you because it was pretty self-indulgent. I've been thinking about that possibility a lot lately and what the result would be. Thank you for reading!

badboy_fangirl February 2 2011, 05:32:41 UTC

If I thought this is what would happen, I might be more interested in watching this show when it comes back. Right now, I'm just so over it.

This is wonderful though. I've got to say that all this writing that you're doing is not making your quality go down. If anything, every piece is better than the last.

You're TOTALLY awesome, and the Jesse/Fi shipper in me is so, so, so happy right now.

abvj February 3 2011, 02:21:01 UTC

I'm sad that you aren't into the show anymore, because I still love it. I understand how love can fade, though.

Thanks for reading! I'm glad that you liked this, especially because I'm somewhat pleased with the way it turned out. There is something absolutely undeniable about Fiona/Jesse, yes?

badboy_fangirl February 3 2011, 17:59:46 UTC

I feel like the writers really dropped the ball with the Jesse/Fiona thing. The only thing at this point that could really intrigue me about the show is if when it came back five years had elapsed or something. I just feel like it will always, always be Fiona running after Michael, willing to give everything for nothing in return. Michael never grows, never changes. When the show comes back, it will be S5, can you believe that? S5! I need them to change it up, and I don't mean by just adding a super attractive African-American guy to their cast ( ... )

entwashian February 2 2011, 06:42:00 UTC

Aw, this is both so sad & so sweet!

And also hot! ;)

abvj February 3 2011, 02:21:10 UTC

Thank you!

explodeychik February 2 2011, 11:11:49 UTC

I absolutely love Jesse and Fi, even moreso after reading your wonderful fic. Thanks for the great read!

abvj February 3 2011, 02:22:08 UTC

Jesse/Fi is something I never knew I wanted until it happened. I still enjoy Michael/Fiona to an extent, but the dynamic between these two is so enjoyable.

Thank-you for reading!

po_thang February 2 2011, 13:09:23 UTC

Nice...very, *very* nice.

I, unlike many people, like the idea of Jesse/Fiona. But then again, I really like Jesse.

Thanks for sharing. :-)

abvj February 3 2011, 02:23:10 UTC

I love Jesse, too! He's my new favorite thing about the show... if only he would shave off that thing on his chin, though. He's still hot with it, but even hotter without it lol

Thank you for reading!