Challenge #53 - Jean-Claude

Apr 01, 2006 23:54

Title: Whipping Boy
Word count: 100
Characters/pairings: Jean-Claude, back when he was human.
Challenge: #53, Jean-Claude
Author's note: It’s a little ironic that the character to take my drabble virginity just happens to be Jean-Claude. Or maybe it isn’t. Anyway, this is my first, but hopefully not my last ( Read more... )

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sabriel_0405 April 1 2006, 13:37:47 UTC
Very nice! Great imagery, very sensual. Looking forward to seeing more from you!

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dwg April 1 2006, 13:51:57 UTC
Thankyou!

But omg, trimming things down to 100 words is so hard. I think I wrote this thing twice and both times came up with 103 at best. Three freaking words over!

I have to admire people who do this on a regular basis.

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sabriel_0405 April 1 2006, 15:54:11 UTC
100 words is not a lot. It definitely takes practice!

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cat_willow April 1 2006, 19:58:30 UTC
Sad and lyrical.

I guess it'll take another 400+ years before J-C breaks away from being owned and used.

Hope to see more of you!

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dwg April 2 2006, 14:32:31 UTC
Thankyou!

I've been bitten by a bit of a fic bug, so hopefully it's incurable. :D

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waterfall8484 April 4 2006, 21:10:35 UTC
Welcome! :~)

I really like this, it's very suggestive, and also very painful. Hope to see you again soon!

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firesongvx April 8 2006, 16:36:30 UTC
Ah! How did I miss you doing a drabble?!

Anyway, this is great! You managed to convey a *lot* of history/psychological baggage with just this little bit of words. ::applauds:: Quite the sensual, lovely description, too. *_*

Great stuff! (And, for the record, I can *never* keep mine within the word limits. ^_^;; They always end up as double-drabbles, heh. Congrats on making this gorgeous scene fit!)

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