[Arashi] [Cyberpunk!AU] Open Your Eyes (15)

Jun 12, 2011 22:46

[Title] Open Your Eyes (15)
[Author] honooko
[Rating] R
[Notes] I know, this is the longest wait for an update ever. But I am not and never will abandon this story! It's all plotted out to the end now, so there's no reason for me not to finish. XD For tangiblewhimsy, who will be in my house in less than a month. ♥

Their plan was extremely complex, and it worried Jun. )

honooko, johnny's ent, arashi, open your eyes

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tangiblewhimsy June 12 2011, 16:55:29 UTC
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

lol, I'm so glad I poke you about this on the every so often. And even though this was a sort of in-between-er chapter, it doesn't read like filler. It has all of the important information, it has set up for the climax. And even after two years I feel like you've maintained the tone of how everyone speaks to one another and interacts. I know that for me? When I leave something alone for even a month or so I start to lose the voice of the piece. So I am duly impressed, LOL!

I think, however, that my favorite bits are the little Ohmiya exchanges. Especially because until now? Everyone's affection has been something quiet and behind closed doors. Jun and Aiba and Nino all love each other and they know it, but it's a comfortable sort of atmosphere that because they know, no one really feels comfortable sharing it. And here is Sho and Ohno coming into the fray and they're all helping Ohno, but at the core Ohno's only even feeling safe because of Nino. There's desperation, but there's also this hope and a bond. I love that Ohno took the chance to give Nino a kiss and that when Nino came back safe he made a moment just for Ohno. ♥

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