Proper Jurisdiction

[aboutbunnies]

Title: Proper Jurisdiciton
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't own them; just borrowing.
Summary: Kate runs. Sawyer follows. “We gotta stop meeting like this.”
Spoilers: through The Last Recruit
Notes: Written for the Five Acts meme. For lenina20, who wanted Kate/Sawyer, cars and captivity. Also submitted to un_love_you, author's choice.

Comments

[aboutbunnies]

YAAAAAY for milestones! I'm flattered that this was your reward :D

That first bit of her leaving - yeah, I thought that as a flight risk who'd beat the crap out of a Federal Marshal they should've had a bit more security around her than they did! But their being lax helped with this scenario, which was lovely of them ;)

She honestly wants to fuck him which is awesome, especially in a context pre-recognition which actually says a lot about who they are
She wants to fuck him, he wants to fuck her, and they don't even know why yet. I'm glad the pre-recognition thing worked. I thought maybe it would be too jarring, but I wanted them to not be remembering, at least for most of it. Because I do think they'd have a connection even without remembering because otherwise...who are they? Not the same people at all.

please, please, please, tell me you are going to bigbang them??
I...still don't know. I hope so, honestly. But I don't know. It scares me. What I really want is for the big bang to happen after the show ends for good. Because I

[lowriseflare]

Oh MAN, this was effing amazing. Everything about it--the spot-on dialogue and the crazy sexual tension and “Turns out you're my jurisdiction, princess.” The physical struggle and the slow kind of recognition and just, all of it. Tigers don't change their stripes. Gorgeous.

[aboutbunnies]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this. I had fun writing both the physicality and the inner stuff, so I'm glad it all worked :)

[antar82]

“Turns out you're my jurisdiction, princess.”

Shivers. God.

She arches an eyebrow, shakes her head, and the words are out before she thinks them, before she even knows what they are. “Someone once told me, tigers don't change their stripes.”

I really loved this piece and expecially this part. Good good work.

[aboutbunnies]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this :)

[helen_halliwell]

So beautiful! I loved the way you portayed the characters here. Very believable and wonderfully written. The tigers and stripes part? Genius! "You're in my jurisdiction"...gah! loved it!!!!

[aboutbunnies]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this :)

[silverdragon76]

“Someone once told me, tigers don't change their stripes.”

Oooh, I love when she nails him like that. <3

[aboutbunnies]

Hee. Thank you! :) Glad you enjoyed.