Ballpoint Stain

[aboutbunnies]

Title: Ballpoint Stain
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Don't own them; just borrowing.
Summary: Post-O6, Jack is pinch-hitting in the ER. He knows, just by sight, that the leg has to go.
Spoilers: Do No Harm, and bits of Jack's general Oceanic 6 storyline.
Notes: This is, in equal parts, for janie_tangerine (who requested Boone and pens for fic or treat 2009) and for lost_in_108 (

Comments

[ozmissage]

Ooh, this is wonderful. I love how you bring out that tortured side of Jack and that last line was amazing.

[aboutbunnies]

Thank you! That last line was one I messed around with a lot, so I'm glad it worked in its final incarnation :)

[aboutbunnies]

Thanks so much! :) So glad you enjoyed - and yes, poor Boone!

[aboutbunnies]

I LOVE YOU AND MISS YOU TOO.

And aww, thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked this. I love when the island follows them home, in a twisted sort of way. Thanks again, dear.

[janie_tangerine]

AAAAH OMG YES.

First of all, if it's Boone related then I'll take Jack centric stuff any day. ;) ;) That said OMG THIS WAS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL I CAN'T EVEN SAY. Your Jack voice is just perfect and argh, this totally hit every possible right button it could hit. I just loved his reaction and god, when the pens fell down I teared up. I seriously did. And the last line, AW. Nirvana!Jack is always welcomed around these parts. ;) And when it said he can't, oh my. *cries* You totally nailed everything you could nail and I loved it to utter pieces, thank you so much!!! <33 I totally loved it.

[aboutbunnies]

Yaay, I'm so glad you liked this! <3 I do so like hitting buttons ;) I was first going to write something Pilot-related with your prompt, but then this came out. Thanks, and again, so so glad you liked it!

[hendercats]

Excellent! It took a beat after I finished, and then it all slammed into me - just perfect drabble writing!

[aboutbunnies]

Thanks so much! I'm glad the impact worked :)