The Distance From Here

Nov 12, 2008 23:23

I'm currently out of town and away from my usual fast internet connection. I'm also away from work, the husband, and two out of three kids. Therefore, I have time to write!

Title: The Distance from Here
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Don't own them; just borrowing.
Spoilers: Up to 5.06 Customer Survey
Summary: Jim. Pam. The fallout from Customer Survey. I ( Read more... )

character: jim halpert, rating: pg, fandom: the office (us), character: pam beesley, pairing: jim/pam, event: mini_nanowrimo

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aboutbunnies November 13 2008, 05:18:31 UTC
Thank you so much!

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lunapluvia November 13 2008, 05:52:03 UTC
I don't have many coherant things to say other than I loved this because it was just love in its simplicity. Even though the situation isn't ideal or simple, this moment is, and that makes it believable that they will work this out.

I want this, even if it's messy.

♥ Thanks for sharing.

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aboutbunnies November 16 2008, 04:11:53 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and for such a lovely comment! I'm glad you felt this could make it work :)

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paper_jam11 November 13 2008, 06:36:07 UTC
Loved the emotion of this - the way it felt raw. I've never read anything of yours, and I look forward to more.

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aboutbunnies November 16 2008, 04:12:55 UTC
Thanks so much - raw was the intent here, so I'm glad it came across as that. I'm relatively new to writing Office fic - I have just a couple others here, but I'm hoping to write more. Thanks again for reading and commenting!

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malfana November 13 2008, 08:47:12 UTC
Amazing job here!! Thanks fpr sharing :)

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aboutbunnies November 16 2008, 04:13:27 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

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sophia_helix November 13 2008, 19:43:39 UTC
I love the pacing on this, and how little actual dialogue there is; you get that sense of how they always seem to know what the other is thinking only up to a point, and then they're on their own and sometimes even words fail them.

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aboutbunnies November 16 2008, 04:14:17 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and for such a kind comment. I love playing with minimal dialogue, so I'm glad you felt it worked here :)

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