When all of this around us'll fall over

[aboutbunnies]

Title: When all of this around us'll fall over
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't own them; just borrowing.
Summary: It starts out as comfort and maybe it ends there, too. Kate/Sun, with mentions of Sun/Jin and Kate/Sawyer.
Note: AU post-rescue. My own, unspoiled, O6 speculation, or part of it. No season 4 spoilers. For the current picture prompt at lost_femmeslash,

Comments

[aboutbunnies]

Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you liked this. I was nervous about posting it because I love Sun but I've never written her, so I'm so glad you thought it worked.

Thank you so much!

And oh, good luck with the Kate/Claire! I'll so look forward to reading it if you do get it out! And I'm glad your day was brightened :)

[aboutbunnies]

Aww, Lenina. You are too sweet, you know that? I'm so glad you still like this, and that it's inspiring you. I can't wait to read your Kate/Sun, even though you don't like the ship! ::hugs::

[elliotsmelliot]

It's not romanticized at all which I appreciate but it is really beautiful. Sun and Kate have always had a special relationship so I could see it progressing like this.

Going back to our earlier conversation. I think the whole less is more works with the physical stuff.

You're touching her like you want to be touched, and she's touching you the way she likes it, and it's surprising to you, in the brief remaining moments of clarity, that they're one in the same. (It's never been one in the same before.)

I mean there are no specifics here but this thought of Kate's acts a map for the physical and the emotional. I really enjoyed this.

[aboutbunnies]

Thank you so much! I've always loved the Sun/Kate relationship - I miss their interactions from the early series.

I was thinking of that conversation as I wrote this. I'd actually written that last section much more explicitly, but it just came out too mechanical so I scrapped it and started again. I'm glad the non-specifics work for you here. Thanks again!

[bebitched]

!!!

This is my favorite femmslash pairing and you wrote it wonderfully! The slow progression from comfort to love and the way you use the wind like whispers to bring them together... brilliant. Great job!

[aboutbunnies]

Thank you so much! This is my favorite femmeslash pairing, too, and my first attempt at writing them, so I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[slybrunette]

*squishes you*

You wrote Kate/Sun! For my comm that everyone's forgotten about. WOOT!!!

He never gave you flowers. And you can't grow a mix tape in a rooftop garden in Los Angeles. Sometimes you're jealous, just a little.

That's kind of scarily right on character. I like that comparison you've drawn.

I like the atmosphere you create her. A lot of this I can see in my head, like some kind of short film. Very nice, very powerful.

Fantastic fic!

[aboutbunnies]

*iz squished*

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I've always loved your Kate/Sun fics, so it means a lot that you enjoyed this.

[hendercats]

Hey, wow - Kate/Sun femmeslash that doesn't twist characterization into knots. *applauds* I like the way you've made this work, and the way they slide into things almost unintentionally.

[aboutbunnies]

Haha, wow, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this :)