5 times Bill and Laura never kissed, and the one time they did fic

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Title: An Emotional Thing
Author: bsg_aussiegirl
Rated: MA
Some graphic sex
Word Count: 2900

Not my usual, but it's what came out when I typed! Back to our usual programming soon. :)

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[bsg_aussiegirl]

Okay, this is proof positive why sometimes you should just write quickly, let it hit the screen, and not fiddle with it too much. It feels that way, but this story needs that urgency. I know. Well, it's out of my system now. I'll be back to co-writing. Hee.

I love how you turn the 'nice and comfortable' on its head, because usually that's a kiss of death in a relationship. But for Laura, we know that's more terrifying than some Bad Boy who'd slap her around. Nothing wrong with comfortable and nice! Especially when you get older! Hee. I love that whole idea that Bill loves normal old missionary sex.

For some reason, I adore this line: I don’t want to be the girl who breaks his heart. I was trying to show that that was her excuse for not fighting his kisses/love. In reality she loved his kisses/love because she was in love with him. Silly girl. And I still think of myself as a girl. So, I'm not sure this will change when I'm 50ish. *snort*

Is it wrong of me to say by the time she actually kisses him, it's anti-climatic? I know! Can't you tell by the way I skipped through that section? I was 'gee, I really should write some more, that's really brief' and then I realised that we all know what I was trying to say. That we all knew what happened in that scene.

I had never really read this form before Somehow I don't think this is typical. Hee.

:)