Could Be You (8/?)

[abelina]

Sleep ebbed away slowly this time, cradling her into consciousness on a warm, weightless pillow.  No dreams or voices interrupted this gentle waking, and when Buffy’s eyes finally drifted open, she felt cozy and content despite the pressure on her bladder and the worries lingering at the edge of her mind.  She shifted, leaning further back

Comments

[slaymesoftly]

Nicely done look at Buffy's confusion and yet lack of confusion about what Spike's place in her life will be.

[abelina]

Thank you :) That's what I hoped to show -- that she's confused about things, yet part of her knows what she wants.

[sarian71]

Wonderful, wonderful chapter!

"The shiver spread over her in a gentle caress, smooth as silk, tickly as a feather, drawing her nipples into hardened points and bringing her body alive with sensation as each tiny hair stood on end. She couldn’t see him, couldn’t hear him, but knew he was behind her."

This made me... shiver. The intimacy between them was breathtaking!

[abelina]

Thank you, Sari :)

Thanks for the feedback -- I really like knowing when I've done something that works. I'm glad I could pull you into the moment like that.

Thanks for reading!

[jamalov29]

That was wonderful to read. Buffy's insights were greatly described , you subtly showing her growing feelings for Spike , she's accepting his love , she tells him the truth about Dawn. Very nice.
And the erotic scene following was beyond sensual. Your depiction of them surrendering to pleasure is gorgeous.
I love Spike's passion mixed with this obvious tenderness, so thoroughly heart-melting.

Your writing is fair to the characters , fair to their emotions , at those moments in time of season 5.

Thank you. :)

[abelina]

I'm glad you're enjoying this, thank you for taking the time to read and leave this lovely review.

Your writing is fair to the characters , fair to their emotions , at those moments in time of season 5.

I appreciate that so so much, thank you! It means a lot to hear that.

Abby

[mcdreamy7]

This chapter was so beautiful, sweet poetic. Loved it all. Can't wait to read more in chapter 9!

[abelina]

Thank you so much!