FIC: "Alone Together on New Year's" Part 1/2 (Lisbon/Jane, rated R)

[abelard369]

Title: Alone Together on New Year's
Author: abelard
Pairing: Lisbon/Jane
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Not mine, nope.
Summary: Patrick Jane and Teresa Lisbon spend New Year's Eve and New Year's Day together.
Author's Notes: Written for the mentalistlist fest. I'm new to the show, new to the fandom, and man, I'm a shipper already! I don't care if they get together

Comments

[dragonsinger]

I like this so far. It's very quiet and understated and fits Patrick and Teresa's relationship well. Excellent fic!

[abelard369]

Thank you so much!!! Part two is finally up if you'd like to read it.

[dragonsinger]

Oh, cool.:)

[evidenceshows]

Very nicely done! I like the cheek kisses which seem perfectly in character for them.

[abelard369]

I'm so glad you think it's in character for them, as I wasn't sure they'd even be comfortable touching each other at this point. But I thought Lisbon seems like the type to observe social niceties to an extent. Thank you for reading!! And the second part is up now, too.

[naika7]

I like this a lot. I like how you mention the ring, I imagine it won't come off until he settles it with Red John.

Great fic! :)

[abelard369]

Thank you!!! IA, that ring is there to stay until the Red John finale, which will probably be the last ep of the show.

Part Two is finally up now if you want to take a look :).

[blacksquirrel]

I love how well you've negotiated the tone of the source here - the characters seem very much themselves - and I'm looking forward to the next bit!

[abelard369]

Thank you very much!!!! I really appreciate your liking the tone of it. Tone is everything with these two characters, I really feel the actors trying to establish what that is and remain true to it.

Part Two is up now if you'd like to check it out :).

[blacksquirrel]

*runs to part 2*!