Comments | abby_juniper: Fic: The Fox and Hare

abby_juniper

Fic: The Fox and Hare

May 31, 2009 17:04

Title: The Fox and Hare

Pairing: Jack/Ianto, Gwen/Rhys

Rating: Teen, if that

Summary: Rhys likes to go to the pub on Tuesdays. So do other people.

Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood, and am making no profit from this. ( Read more... )

torchwood, fic, gwen/rhys, jack/ianto

Comments 18

phantomreviewer May 31 2009, 16:53:42 UTC

I loved that. So genuine! :-D

abby_juniper May 31 2009, 17:13:37 UTC

Aw, thankyou! XD

alba17 May 31 2009, 17:05:09 UTC

Very cute and well-written. But would Rhys really jump to the conclusion that Jack and Ianto are a couple just because they're having a drink together? I felt like there needed to be more of a buildup to that, like Rhys observing something more, like them touching each other or something. Anyway, minor point.

abby_juniper May 31 2009, 17:18:44 UTC

Okay, thanks. I'll bear that in mind! :-)

Thankyou! :-D

goddess_ophelia May 31 2009, 17:53:56 UTC

Cute!!

abby_juniper May 31 2009, 17:55:24 UTC

Thanks!! :-)

hab318princess May 31 2009, 19:38:08 UTC

loved that, especially the reaction of the friends!

abby_juniper May 31 2009, 19:43:08 UTC

Thanks! I loved writing it!

a_silver_story May 31 2009, 19:45:18 UTC

Awww! So cute!

Creepy thing: just been listening to Hot n Cold.

abby_juniper May 31 2009, 19:46:23 UTC

Hehe - yeah, that is creepy! Good song, though.

Thankyou for commenting!