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A Light On A Hill

Jul 02, 2009 01:03

Title: A Light On A Hill
Author: abandonedmem
Fandom: Chuck
Pairing: Chuck/Sarah
Spoilers: Slight spoilers for the finale.
Summary: A look at what might have happened if Chuck hadn't uploaded the new intersect and if Sarah left. Inspired by the song A Light On A Hill by Margot & The Nuclear So and So's. Oneshot.

( She whispers to me I was meant to be free, this life that we built is deadly. )

chuck, fic

Comments 13

spacemonkey1013 July 2 2009, 08:53:51 UTC

God!*clasps hands over chest*That was...*chokes*ugh*gasps*God, that hurt!*keels over*

It's a scene between a happy ending and not having them together at all.

Awesome. :)

Now let me just move onto a corner and nurse this melancholic feeling you brought on.

abandonedmem July 2 2009, 22:08:04 UTC

Thank you! I had a big reunion scene written, but it didn't fit with the tone of the story so I chose something a bit in between. I'm glad you liked it. :)

andsheloves July 2 2009, 10:32:36 UTC

Ohmygosh, it's been a while since a fic made me cry, but this? Seriously, oh so good. Thanks for sharing. ♥

abandonedmem July 2 2009, 22:08:28 UTC

Aww, thank you so much!

ndnickerson July 2 2009, 14:21:56 UTC

awwwwww. i was very worried it wouldn't end well, and then it did. awwwwww. =)

abandonedmem July 2 2009, 22:09:01 UTC

I almost ended it at her funeral, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Thank you! :)

dulce_aparencia July 2 2009, 18:46:46 UTC

Geez woman! You had me with mixed feelings. First I was laughing because of the names you used for Sarah's identity XD then you had me on the verge of tears because they might not end up together. THEN my eyes were all watery because I thought she had died... then I was thrilled they received a happy ending. XD I would use all the smileys to portray this small paragraph I wrote but this place doesn't have them.

abandonedmem July 2 2009, 22:17:23 UTC

HAHAHA I knew you'd appreciate Sarah's cover names. Now we just have to name someone Ivana so they all fit. You know, most of the time I only make fic cause I know you'll read it lol.

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dulce_aparencia July 2 2009, 22:24:02 UTC

YOU GOT THE SMILIES ON HERE!!!!

XD Yeah I read each and every one of your fics. EGADS! I haven't read the 100th fic! >.> You didn't post it on LJ

abandonedmem July 2 2009, 22:49:26 UTC

Oh, that's right! I need to go do that.

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abandonedmem July 2 2009, 22:50:34 UTC

Thanks so much! This one was really fun to write.