I Wrote A Short Story!

[aandyen]

I wrote this thing up earlier tonight on a whim, largely because I suddenly had the idea to and had to do it. Cross-posted it on dA (hey, its an easy place to keep updated), but I figured I'd put it here, too... BEHIND A CUT.

Comments

[destinthehero]

You've got a solid idea here; I think what you should do it play it straight though, instead of doing the ironic, tounge-in-cheek, leaning on the fourth wall. Tell it from the 'bad-guys' perspective, hold a few things back, and then the twist ending is that he quietly retires after the heroes unite ze warudo.