“Whisper of a Moment”, 4/8

Sep 10, 2010 17:41

 
Fourth installment.
“Whisper of a Moment”, Part 4 )

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tessarin September 19 2010, 16:03:08 UTC
Really enjoyed this part, the interplay between the heroine and Ethan was great. Her thinking she was playing him and getting over her head. Acting older than her age I presume was a hint. When I saw the DNR I thought immediately either Faith or Cordelia. I'm leaning to towards the former given that this is between Season 3 & 4 and Cordy is not yet in a coma. The anger would fit as well.

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aadler September 19 2010, 17:39:26 UTC
Would you believe, it never occurred to me for a moment to think about Cordelia? Mostly that’s because - as I believe I observed to ffutures - I finished this story while I was in Iraq, in 2003, and before I had seen the last episodes of Angel Season 4 (OR Buffy Season 7), so I wasn’t aware of Cordelia’s coma until months later.

“The anger would fit as well.” Not quite sure what you mean by that.

Overall, thanks. I enjoy writing Ethan, and this particular interchange was a lot of fun.

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