Yeah! Harmony rules! And she might even get away with it, she's finally found some suckers she can handle. Explaining why she drinks blood might be more of a challenge, of course...
Harmony the Vampire Slayer?? *boggles* Heh, this is a gig that Harmony might come to like. Her very own gang, and she's in charge of folks who think she's come to save them - for a price. I think this is going to become very interesting. Looking forward to chapter 2.
I'm not one hundred percent with you on your Harmony voice, a few things don't really feel very Harmony like to me, but other than that?
Gold! Absolute gold. You should bottle your inspiration and sell it, I don't think you're capable of writing an "usual" story, not even if you were activelly trying to do it.
And the first part of my comment on the Harmony voice is assuming we're talking Earth-prime :) Harmony, which, this being you, isn't a sure bet.
I really don’t play that much with alternate timelines; I just do it often enough that people keep watching for it. Yes, this is mainline canon Buffy/Angel.
If you have any corrections you’d like to suggest to bring myHarmony’s voice more in line with canonHarmony’s, I’d be happy to consider them. I’ll probably go back now and then to tweak the story anyhow, that’s the kind of thing I do, but these days I’m always looking forward to the next story.
As for the “gold” and “bottling inspiration” parts, thanks. I’m always glad to hear that I seem to be hitting the right notes.
I’ve always had a soft spot for Harmony; she got a sympathetic mention in my very first story, “Point of Focus”, well before she joined the night-life and began to appear more frequently. In addition, her vampire self interests me in that there seems to be absolutely no change in her personality, from what we saw before.
One thing that seems to hold true in all the vampHarmony appearances in canon is her desire to be more than she is. Unfortunately, she’s consistently not competent to realize her dreams, and most of the time she’s clueless as to just why she keeps falling short. Sad, really.
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Heh, this is a gig that Harmony might come to like. Her very own gang, and she's in charge of folks who think she's come to save them - for a price. I think this is going to become very interesting.
Looking forward to chapter 2.
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Gold! Absolute gold. You should bottle your inspiration and sell it, I don't think you're capable of writing an "usual" story, not even if you were activelly trying to do it.
And the first part of my comment on the Harmony voice is assuming we're talking Earth-prime :) Harmony, which, this being you, isn't a sure bet.
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If you have any corrections you’d like to suggest to bring myHarmony’s voice more in line with canonHarmony’s, I’d be happy to consider them. I’ll probably go back now and then to tweak the story anyhow, that’s the kind of thing I do, but these days I’m always looking forward to the next story.
As for the “gold” and “bottling inspiration” parts, thanks. I’m always glad to hear that I seem to be hitting the right notes.
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I'll be reading and commenting on the rest of this story today, I hope.
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Ditto on what jgracio said about your inspiration. The voice works well for me though. And I cannot wait to see where you're going with this *g*
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One thing that seems to hold true in all the vampHarmony appearances in canon is her desire to be more than she is. Unfortunately, she’s consistently not competent to realize her dreams, and most of the time she’s clueless as to just why she keeps falling short. Sad, really.
Anyhow, thanks.
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