Hmm...How do you decide which voice to write in? First, Second or Third or omnivesant??

Nov 12, 2009 13:12

I admit that I still get confused in which choice viewpoint that is easiest for me to use. I've used first person POV for "Sacrilege," and for "Forbidden Fruit,' but because it's easier to explain the motives and hidden emotions for the main character I'm writing about.

Now on the second chapters- I wonder if I HAVE to stay in Byakuya or Hikaru's POV, or should I switch POV with the chapter ( like making Rukia or Kaoru the voices in the second chapters or does that just make it more confusing??)

When I was writing "Everything to Save, I'd switch from L's viewpoint one chapter, to Light's in the other. They were such a psychological pair that I felt like I had to keep on top of Light's diabolcal nature. I still miss writing that story but I made some mistakes, lost reader interest when I didn't provide a hot Yaoi scene or any REAL storyline between the two.

I hope I can provide some good scenes in my current stories, lol. There has to be a hidden formula on writing good sex scenes.

I dislike third (to write- I'll read any veiwpoint) because i grow tired of explaining a character by her job, hair color, skin color, rank, ect. I just want to say "Mireille spilled her tea," Mirielle fell off her yellow scooter while Kirika suppressed a small grin.." Ect.........

I feel stoopid,,_-

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