Oneshot: bloodline alternative (Smallville)

[vodooman]

Bloodline Alternative

Fandom: Smallville
Author: vodooman
Rating: PG-13
Genre: episode rewrite, prompt reply
Characters/Pairings: Chloe, Davis
Short summary: Throughout her drive to the hospital, Chloe was thinking about the fact that had she been at her office, she might have had a run in with whoever it was that destroyed her office inner living.
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Comments

[vagrantdream]

oh wow, you have your own writing comm. This is awesome. XD
I really loved this piece.
What I like about how you write chlavis is that you come up with ideas that have been as of yet unexplored, always major [++].

Bloodline, yay. You have given me a plot bunny *involving this ep* How could you? :p

And I love this quote. I wanna frame it. ...if he had problems now with her working at ISIS, then he’d have a coronary when she started to work fulltime for Ollie and his League. You go, have a corollary, Jimmy. Eheh. yeah, I'm so mean.

I loved the image in the end, of Chloe and Davis? Like you mentioned it is a disturbing image but at the same time so...gahhh! romantic?! Not in a puppies and hearts way, but in a gothic one.

[vodooman]

thank you for the nice, and long commment! I always love it when you comment on my fics!

and as for the fic idea for bloodline... lol, sorry... hehehehe, no, you know i am happy when i can inspire other people to writ esomething...

and as for the end... well, actually that is the picture I wanted to draw... her and him, in a dark scene, but still it trying to come out as romantic/goth...

so I am actually happy that it did turn out that way! yeay!

[melimiranda]

I loved it!!!!! I read it on FF.net and I read it again here, and I still loved it!!! I always wanted to see more of Chloe and Davis on the Bloodline episod and now thanks to your fic it has become true!!

Thank you!!!

[vodooman]

I know... it was strange to have the episode of bloodline... in which chloe finds information on davis, knows that lois (faora) is after davis, and then just goes off to save clark instead... that was sooooo strange... I always wondered why chloe didn't think about checking on davis... and dont tell me that she wouldnt put two and two together and then maybe find out that faora!lois was seen in the hospital...

urrggg... sooo smallville... anyway. thank you.I am happy that you liked it... I sat on it for some days.... but it was made with pure love... lol.

[madluv4mickbeth]

this was pretty awesome.. i liked it a lot.. ty :)

[vodooman]

ooohhh... thank you too!
hehehe, happy that you liked this!

ahhhhh... your icon is soooo cute!!! omg! davis is smiling!

[madluv4mickbeth]

ty the avi is by snagging :)... i know i love and miss his smile.. :)

[vodooman]

yes i think i remember seeing it at snagged LJ site... and I do remember thinking that it was soooo cute... I mean, he has this shy smile down like no one else... lol.
he really is totally ... *melt*

ps: I miss his smiles too... too bad we wont see him on the show... I just hope that he'll have a new show in which he'll play something similar or at least a good guy... (and not a good guy turned psycho)

[chlavis333]

Great alternative to Bloodline. I can't beleive I haven't read this before. Well done. I love Chloe's reaction when seeing Davis hugging Lois. Awesome. I love that she's reaasured that everything going to be ok in a moment where it doesn't seem like it would be. Excellent job!

[vodooman]

giggles... no fears!
you know i checked last time... I have like only 25 or so fics atm in my archive that are chlavis... so, it's no wonder that you did miss it... it is very easy to loose it in the floods of other fics I have floating around here...

I know, a much better ending to bloodline... right?! I remember thinking that i wanted more chlavis in it! like... hm, just like this here... and that lois came for davis... wasnt that strange to chloe? why didnt she make sure that davis was alright...
anyway... so i tried to adress those points in here, because they really bugged me in the episode!

[chlavis333]

Yep, that bugged me in the ep too! And wouldn't Chloe be suspicous after Faora left and saw that pic of Davis? Anyway you did a great job of adressing those points.