Harry, Hermione, Fred, George, and Ginny gather around Ron's bed int he hospital wing. Fred and George had been in Hogsmeade to look into buying Zonko's and to surprise Ron on his Birthday. Well, um... Surprise! They all speculate on what could have happened, Ron croaks -_-' and Hagrid makes a hasty entrance. (He was reading to Aragog.)
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Harry, however, had never been less interested in Quidditch; he was rapidly becoming obsessed with Draco Malfoy.
My favourite fanfic tease!
(Swoons again.)
I do think Harry's dimness about Draco's disappearances is just that bit beyond suspension-of-disbelief. After all, he'd made a lot of use of the Room of Requirement himself in the previous year.
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Oh, and there's this:
" 'Where have you been?' demanded Ginny, as Harry sprinted into the changing room. The whole team was changed and ready; [...]
'I met Malfoy,' Harry told her quietly, as he put his scarlet robes over his head.'
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Can you not just imagine the look on Ginny's face?!
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(and it's cannon, too! She wrote it)
There more I think about it, the more I shake my head and wonder about this very fanfic-like description of the romantic relationships and scenes like those that are not intended to be romantic in any way, but can be easily interpreted as such.
And then JKR wonders about all these different shippers...
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She's having entirely too much fun with us.
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I actually liked the "between the lines, behind closed doors" kind of subplot with Draco. There were always a few sentences thrown in between the other plots to remind us that there is something going on with Draco. Very subtle and thus in stark contrast to other subplots, like the romance, and there especially the "roaring beast" in Harry's stomach. (I'll roll my eyes forever at this line)
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Also, this is the part that sounds most like a really embarrassing bad-fic to me ...
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