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crimson_vipera October 20 2011, 12:26:09 UTC
Sorry, this comment will not be very in-depth, but I've got a cold and i'm not really up to par with my English skills at times like this...

I loved the story. Claire was a fantastic character. So was Oberon and everything that had to do with the Fey people.

The Dean/Cas aspects? Hot and sweet and so, so real. I love that You didn't end the story when they rejoined with Sam and Bobby. So many authors leave off just at the start of the relationship. Much as I love the happily ever after feel that gives off, I do find it a bit frustrating at times. And to have it told from Sam's point of view is a nice idea.

I love how You've used the little details like the amulet, or Cas comment about not being in Dean's ass, or Risa. Especially Risa.

This made me laugh: "they stayed on the Canadian side for their… word-beginning-with-A-that-no-one-was-allowed-to-say-around-Dean-in-reference-to-the-passage-of-a-period-of-twelve-months thing ( ... )

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a_carnal_mink October 22 2011, 09:19:02 UTC

Thanks for such a lovely lovely comment - especially while so ill!

Pleased as punch to read that you enjoyed it so much. Especially Risa. :)

I'll look out for anything more You write.

My back catalogue's here if you're interested.

Thanks again and I hope you're feeling much better now!

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lifefiction October 20 2011, 21:26:34 UTC
I ♥ this! Great job!

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a_carnal_mink October 22 2011, 09:19:44 UTC

So glad you liked! Thank-you! :)

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queengeekkeri October 23 2011, 03:59:31 UTC
Everything about this story is completely plausible. Love that Balthazar is in it. Love that Jimmy put Sam & Dean in their place saying what EVERYONE wanted to say about them having double standards when it comes to working with Crowley. REALLY LOVE the whole Oberon part, there is just not enough Fey in the series at all. Claire is bad ass & who wouldn't use Dean jerking off as spank bank material. Dean/Cas was perfect spot on to how I think their relationship would really be. Sam's POV is pretty great too & him telling Dean that he knows he swings is great. Kudos to Bobby for the hedonist comment.

ALL THE LOVE!!!

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a_carnal_mink November 15 2011, 10:34:50 UTC

...who wouldn't use Dean jerking off as spank bank material.

This made me laugh. :D

Thanks very much for all the kind words. Very pleased to hear you enjoyed it so much!

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river_rat_grrl November 4 2011, 00:51:50 UTC
I came here from a recommendation by xlamentcasx. I don't have time to read the whole thing right now but I know I WILL be reading this because I made the mistake of scrolling down about half way on the first part to get a little sample and I just couldn't stop until I'd hit the end of the page. Literally. Could. Not. Stop. Reeeeeally looking forward to this now!

I just wanted to thank you in advance for what I'm certain is going to be an epically good story!

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a_carnal_mink November 15 2011, 10:36:27 UTC

Thanks for saying so, and I hope the rest of it meets with your approval! :)

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off_the_post18 November 12 2011, 06:16:11 UTC
You get tons of kudos for including the Fey in this! Love to see them represented and wish that SPN would do more with them. Dean is totally a Fey Prince. ;)

Love the way you built up the relationship between Dean/Cas and all of the little things you included from the show.

Oh, and MROW! I will never be able to go to (or look at) Niagara Falls again in the same way.

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a_carnal_mink November 15 2011, 10:37:45 UTC

I will never be able to go to (or look at) Niagara Falls again in the same way.

Then my work here is done. ;D

Thanks for the lovely comment. So glad you enjoyed!

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