Song Title Fic #2: Oompa Radar

Apr 11, 2006 10:29

Oompa Radar

Since this is a ficlet, it's completely unbetaed. All mistakes are mine.

For Tkp. Hope you like it, sweetie.

Rampant silliness.

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stars91 April 11 2006, 14:46:58 UTC
Teeheehee....cute!

Rampant silliness.

Definitely, but still cute!

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a2zmom April 11 2006, 15:01:06 UTC
thanks!

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ba4ever April 11 2006, 15:04:27 UTC
Oz pointed into the rows of gaily dressed band members. "Third row, fifth from the left." Buffy pulled out her cross bow and sighted down the mechanism. Oz tapped her on the shoulder. "Other left."

"Oh, yeah." She let the bolt fly and it was a clean hit into the shoulder. Instantly, green liquid began to bubble up. Another bolt right into the mid-section and the monster collapsed into a pile of green slime that bore a startling resemblance to lime Jell-O.

HAHAHA! That was great. Old school is love.

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a2zmom April 11 2006, 15:11:32 UTC
Old school really is love and I had a ball with this.

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stoney321 April 11 2006, 15:25:03 UTC
Heh. Totally loved the "tuba or not tuba" line.

That's what you built this whole thing around, huh? :D

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a2zmom April 11 2006, 15:37:46 UTC
believe it ot not, no but as soon as it popped into my brain, I knew it would make the story.

My resistance regarding bad puns is noexistent.

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carlyinrome April 11 2006, 15:53:00 UTC


Hee, yay! Old school scoobies! That was too much cuteness, lady.

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a2zmom April 11 2006, 16:14:35 UTC
It was fun to write, a nice change from the angst.

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lettered April 11 2006, 15:54:31 UTC
He oom-ed when he should have pa-ed."

AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHA!!!!!!!!! BEST LINE EVER!

Parade crisis. Tuba or not tuba. Does NOT get better than this!

I'm not sorry I gave you such a hard title. You double shot my mocha.

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a2zmom April 11 2006, 16:16:44 UTC
While I was taking my shower this orning I thought of the Rose Bowl parade and then the last line. Once those two were in place, the rest of the story was right there.

It turned out to be a great title, so thanks!

And I'm glad you liked it.

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