[Fic - Kanda/Allen] Slow Step (1/?)

[a1y_puff]

Title: Slow Step (1/?)
Author: a1y-puff
Fandom: D. Gray-Man
Pairing: None yet. Eventual Kanda/Allen though.
Genre: Romance/Humor for now.
Word Count: 2258
Rating: PG-ish
Warning: None really, I think.
Summary: Kanda was used to claiming mutual hate with Allen, so when the bean calmly and matter-of-factly confessed he was in love with him, Kanda didn’t know

Comments

[harmony283]

What I want to see? Keeping them both IC XD *but then I can't really see that until the chapters are written so*

But so far YAY. Because out of the two Allen would be the most likely to confess, and take charge in that sense *nod* since no Kanda isn't emotionally dumb, but he doesn't know how to initiate things (most likely).

The ending scene was freakin' adorable, btw. *snickers* so cute~

Also like the story (since again it sorta fits with...the only way I can see this pairing working *if it isn't just a hit-and-run kind of deal*)

chapter's also a bit on the short side *used to longer ones* but that's personal preference I suppose...

Keep it up~ ^^

[a1y_puff]

I'll try to keep them as IC as I can XD

Yeah, I agree, Allen is the one who's more likely to start anything, because.. well, Kanda is Kanda, what can I say? XD

Anyway thanks, glad you enjoyed it ^___^

sorry fior the length, I tried to make it longer but failed miserably. I decided to leave it like that rather than adding stupid things and dragging the story, so.. ^^;;

Thanks for the comment! :D

[harmony283]

okay *nod* I'll hold you to it XD *since you do a good job with them*

Yeahhh...I mean one person's reply to the whole making 'em fall in love thing was 'well Kanda needs to be a little OOC for it to happen' and it's like "Uh...why?" ^^; that just turns me off really bad XD Because i mean if they can't be paired together acting like themselves then what's the point?

Eh I usually end up having mine long unintentionally XD *usually aims for 10 pages* but if you run the risk of just putting silly things in--then don't. *shakes head* but don't try to restrict yourself either. Long chapters = love <3

You're very welcome~~ ^^ have some pocky? *in a good mood cuz her girlfriends coming tomorrow...err, today technically but whatever XD--for christmas~

[a1y_puff]

*is nervous* PRESSURE!!! XDD lol, I hope I won't disappoint you then ^^

Haha, I knooooow. The point is kinda lost when you make them so OOC they're barely recognizable. And it's not just Kanda, even Allen is often described being too soft or too girly... the pint of it being shonen-ai is because both parties are MALE who have manly/boyish qualities!! *argh, sorry for the rant, I can't find too many good fics these days >.>*

I usually intentionally writing long fics only when I'm writing for someone else, like a request or something. I don't know why. A friend of mine said I'm a pressure junkie XD
And yes, I'll try to NOT add stupid things. But when I'm inspired, I will probably write longer ^^. I personally love reading long chapters XDD

Yay pocky! Me wants!! *haven't had lunch and it's 2 pm here*

[harmony283]

XD So many people have been using my fics name as a pun lately *blinkkks* sorry! *fidgets*

Mhm yeah XP I mean that's part of the reason I took on that one request on the kink meme (that was Kanda x Allen) so I could at least write one fic that had 'em both IC. Though not sure how well I'd manage to put them in an actual relationship though if I did *like with that oneshot thingie I saw from you a LONG while ago* I'd have to make it plausible in my brain, and amusing enough to where I could stand it XD

Hahah I tend to write long either way (since I've been filling requests on the kink meme--I tend to make those long cuz I don't really like pointless smut XD)

YAY can't wait for them~~ though I do know some people don't like long chapters *they get bored if it's not something they really love* so ^^;

XD and it's 10AM here and I just got outta the shower and am cleaning like heck XD *for the fourth time in like 2 days*

[a1y_puff]

LoL, good for you? XD
Haha... 'sokay. I'm just gonna get my friend to character-beta for me so the next parts would be as IC as they could be ^^;

Ah yes, I remember that kink meme. It was a nice and amusing read :D
Mmh... Which oneshot of mine? *has too many oneshots*
You should try writing them in a relationship though. :D

Haha, well, if I had my own PC, I could probably write longer. When I wrote this, I kept glancing at my brother's sleeping form, hoping he wouldn't wake up just yet so I could write *sighs*

I'll try to aim for 3000 words first next time. Hopefully XD

Heheh.. Excited from waiting for your girlfriend? :D
Have fun with her ^^
It's nearly 1AM here and damn, I need to sleep XD