[Fanfic -- Yullen] By Your Side

Sep 07, 2009 15:48

Title: By Your Side
Fandom: D.Gray-Man
Pairing: Kanda/Allen
Summary: Because if nothing else, at least they have each other.
Disclaimer: I'm not Hoshino Katsura, and I'm not the owner of the prompts either.
Warning: Mention of lemon.

Author Note: Actually still waiting for my claim to be approved in 1sentence, but oh well I’ll just post this first while I ( Read more... )

kanda/allen, fanfiction, d.gray-man, allen walker, kanda yuu

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rizuka September 7 2009, 15:07:50 UTC
thaaaaaannnnkkksssssss~!
even tho i'm no yullen fan but i think those were AWESOME xD (if i dun see it from allena-fan view, tho ^^;;)

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a1y_puff September 8 2009, 08:40:51 UTC
You're welcome and thank you! :D
(And no, it wouldn't look awesome from Allena, KanLina, Laven or LaviYuu fan views, so don't XD)

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rizuka October 18 2009, 21:54:37 UTC
It's wonderful. Really. I have no other words.
Would you give me permission to translate this fic into Russian? I'd like to share my pleasure with Russian fans.
Aliena19

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a1y_puff October 19 2009, 01:47:20 UTC
Hi there!

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :D
And sure, you can translate it! I'd be happy ^^
Just when you're done, could you please give me the link? Not that I speak Russian,but I wanna know how my fic would look like in another language. ^^

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hakasha September 7 2009, 15:36:33 UTC
awwww, loved it! but I loved these ones more: 3, 5 (ooh, no. 5 was rich xD), 9, 10 (Allen speaks Kandanese, and "Che" is the keyword for everything!! oh, I laughed and laughed and laughed with this one), 20 (haha! I can soo see Allen cooing at a pic of lil' Kanda! xDDD), 35 (the way Allen says it is just priceless. and Kanda lets the book fall! xDD), 44 (I have no words to express how amusing this one was) and finally, no. 46 (I really felt this urge to say "awwww!" when I read this one). ^^

Oh, and I noticed a few typos, should I point them out? And isn't a bit of text missing in no. 37? or is it supposed to end like that? O.o

anyway, it was a really nice read. ^^

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a1y_puff September 8 2009, 08:34:41 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed them :D
And yes, isn't Kandanese just awesome? XD;

About #37, uh.. Yes, it's kind of unfinished. See, since my PC's dead at home, I wrote all these at an internet café and due to being rather in a hurry (the bill, the bill! XD) I didn't reread and re-check it once I finished and just posted it *headdesks*
When I reread it later through my cellphone, I realized that embarrasing incomplete sentence but no internet (or PC) to fix it ^^;

Oh, and yes, if you don't mind pointing them out, I'll fix it next time I go to an internet café :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed these ^^

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hakasha September 8 2009, 11:08:49 UTC
hehe. well. here are the typos I spotted (though in some cases I might be wrong about them being typos, English is not my mother tongue, so.. hehe ^^"):

no. 1: "There was no other word to describe how Kanda (...) was graceful." Hmm, I think the sentence should be "There was no other word to describe how Kanda (...) but graceful." Though I may be wrong about this one.

no. 3: "which was a rather rare occasions".

no. 9: "You king of glutton" --> I suppose it should be "You King of gluttons" instead...?

no. 15: "Allen would just hold him and said nothing (...)" --> "just hold him and say nothing".

no. 19: "May your soul finds salvations."

no. 30: "(...) making him looked like some kind of ghost."

no. 36: "(..) instead of be happy or relieved (...)"

no. 46: "(...) when Kanda felt like the illusions around him was driving him crazy(...)"

hmm, and i guess that's it. ^^

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a1y_puff September 8 2009, 11:28:37 UTC
Arr. That's a lot xD;

Thank you! I'll fix it as soon as I can :)

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ryuujidiceboy September 7 2009, 23:05:20 UTC
OMG~! I loved this~! I adored these: 09 (Kanda would say that~), 10 (cause Kandanese is awesome), 15 (so sweet~), 20-21 (Allen is priceless in both), 25 (how can you not like this one), 28 (XP Poor Kanda), 35 (best confession ever), 27 (I couldn't help but connect it to 25 in a way~), 43 (speaks for itself~), 48 (Sweet~).
Lovely job~! As an kind of obsessed Yullen fan this made me so happy~!

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a1y_puff September 8 2009, 08:15:34 UTC
Thank you sooo much! I'm glad you enjoyed them as I enjoyed writing them ^^

And as a fellow obsessed Yullen fan, I'm glad that these little pieces made you happy ^_____^

Thanks for reading :D

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etlens September 8 2009, 20:44:22 UTC
44!! forty-four , I love all, thanks for writing like this...my inner-yullen (well inner was not the correct word) is so grateful.

kisses

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a1y_puff September 8 2009, 21:28:12 UTC
Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed this. :D

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twilightscribe September 10 2009, 04:44:38 UTC
Now I really feel like I could use a hug. Or some good smut. But that's a tale for another time. ^ ^ Overall I thought it was really good, noticed a few minor errors but nothing too bad.

... I am such a Yullen fangirl. First shonen-ai pairing for this series that I fell in love with. xD

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a1y_puff September 10 2009, 05:09:13 UTC
Here, have a hug from Kanda. *points at icon* XD
Thank you, glad you enjoyed them. :)

Haha, Yullen is my current obsession XD

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