[Fic--FujiTezu] A Little More Time for elysis

Dec 18, 2008 12:30

Title: A Little More Time
Pairing: Fuji/Tezuka (YES, in that order)
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Genre: Fluffy Angst (said my beta XD)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1450
Summary: Fuji felt like Tezuka was distant by each day, and he decided to close the distance.
Warnings: First attempt at FujiTezu. But I’m basically a fan of co-dominance, so... XD
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fuji shuusuke, fujitezuka, fanfiction, tezuka kunimitsu

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mitsu_syusuke December 18 2008, 06:06:32 UTC
this is..wow..
it's rare to see a nice Fuji/Tez and this fic is really good!
i like Fuji's aggressive yet tender action, and Tezuka's hesitant and the struggle inside him..
AND the blush! lol it's a nice touch to really point out that Tezuka has feelings for Fuji but is in denial..
i like this fic very much!

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a1y_puff December 18 2008, 09:12:21 UTC
Wheee~! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! such an encouraging 1st comment <3

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elysis December 18 2008, 06:32:28 UTC
I think it's a TeFu liked FuTe, which makes me like it more because I actually always like TeFu more xD.
I guess this is the first FuTe I've ever finished reading. And thanks very much for that cause you made my first FuTe a very good one :).

I really love the Fuji in this. He's aggressive yet not all that aggressive. He felt so insecure yet still very confident in his own way.

Thanks very much for writing me this. Maybe I will trying to read some more FuTe in the future *hugs and kisses*.

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a1y_puff December 18 2008, 13:09:02 UTC
Hehe, it's coz basically, I'm a big fan of co-dominance. and besides, I can't imagine Tezuka being totally uke XD

I'm so glad you enjoyed your first FuTe, dear! and you're very welcome! I'm happy writing this for you coz you've made this lovely layout for me <33

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dark_kana December 18 2008, 06:45:09 UTC
Whiiii! XD
I love this FujiTezuka. It's not easy to write (I think). You don't find a lot of them. And it was really great! XD
Fuji was cute and tender and aggressive and ... XD
And Tezuka's hesistation and his struggle and the BLUSH!!! XD I loved the blush! XD

Saa... Write a sequel where they have done enough waiting... XD PLEASE!!! Pweaty pweaty pwease witha cherry on top.. XD WITH A HAPPY ENDING OF COURSE!!!! XD XD XD

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a1y_puff December 18 2008, 13:09:28 UTC
It's indeed not easy to write as I'm so used to TeFu XD
Blushing!Tezuka is LOVE, don't you think ^______^

and I'm very sorry but I dun think it'll have a sequel.. at least not anytime soon.
You DO know how long my to-write list is, don't you XDD
But I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading ^_________^

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dark_kana January 3 2009, 15:48:47 UTC
*squeels again when she reread it...*
yes, blushingTezuka is love! *hugs the boys*

no sequel? *pouts* No sequel? That is sad...
at least not anytime soon. *smiles* So there is hope... XD
yes, I know... *glares once again at both our to-do/write-list

of course I enjoyed it! Thanks for writing!! ^_^

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white_ashes07 December 18 2008, 09:00:36 UTC
Oh, I hope Tezuka acknowledges his feelings soon. We never know what Fuji might do if he has to wait for too long...

...to tell the truth, though, I'm kinda hoping that Fuji would indeed make another move, LOL.

Are you planning to write a sequel? You should!

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a1y_puff December 18 2008, 13:10:03 UTC
LOL. He needs a little more time... with "helps" from Fuji, of course :P
And don't worry, let's just assume Fuji is planning on another move XD

Err.. Sorry, I don't plan on any sequel.. you know my to-write list is pretty long ne? ^^;;
But thanks for reading!

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Yet another brilliant fic jadeskye79 December 18 2008, 09:39:36 UTC
As always brilliant! Loved the opening paragraph describing the tennis practice scene, very vivid and can so imagine it as an actual scene in the anime.

noticed something in 1st paragraph of 2nd scene. "Tezuka sat on the desk" I'm guessing you meant Tezuka sat "at" the desk. 'cause sitting on the desk would complete contradict the chair screeching later in the scene... Just a heads up. :)

Am gonna join the chant... Sequel, sequel, sequel... this so demands a sequel ;)

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Re: Yet another brilliant fic a1y_puff December 18 2008, 13:10:42 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this fic!
and thanks for the correction. my beta must've missed it ^^;

...*looks away, pretending to not hear the chant*
Sorry dear, but I have a lot to write so I dun think there will be a sequel anytime soon ^^;;

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