Title: To Define
Author:
a1y-puffFandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters: friendship Tezuka/Fuji, (yes, friendship only)
Prompt: #26. Smirk
Genre: general/friendship
Word Count: 1057
Rating: G
Summary: Even Tezuka has his wonders. One of them is Fuji Shuusuke.
Warnings: randomness alert!
Disclaimer: PoT belongs to Konomi-sensei. Tezuka and Fuji belong to
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Comments 25
Tezuka as 14, I think you might have captured that.
He really seems to be a thinker, I just missed something - I dont know what it is yet. But over all, really cute *hugs* Good job.
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and if you find anything you think is missing, pelase do tell me :)
and thanks a lot *hugs back*
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Write more fics soon! :D
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thanks for reading!! I;ll write more soon i guess x3
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Btw, Tezuka is like a 14-year-old in this fic, but in some parts he is still a bit like an older boy.
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Hahah, it wasn't really difficult, the plot bunnies were jumping at me like mad that I had to wrote it down on paper, remember? XD:;
and yeah, I think that's the most fourteen-years-old like Tezuka can do... he acts waaaay too mature than he should've been after all XDD
glad u liked it tho *glomps*
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I like Tezuka because he acts more mature than he is XD But you did a good job. He feels more like a 14-year-old boy in your fic. I want to say that it is kinda cute, but 'cute' isn't really a word that would describe Tezuka XD
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Yeah, indeed, that's just the way Tezuka is ne? mature :3
and well I dunno what to call Tezuka, but cute is quite an appropriate word for him... for now XDDD
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Sentences of the day: “Don’t frown, Tezuka. You look old enough even without frowning,”
“and you look feminine enough even without that too-sweet smile of yours,”
Thank you!! <3
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and hahah, I just want to see them bickering a little so I wrote those lines XD;;
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Lol, really good perspective of friend!Tezuka/Fuji.
“Don’t frown, Tezuka. You look old enough even without frowning,” Fuji teases him yet again.
Tezuka smirks, “and you look feminine enough even without that too-sweet smile of yours,” he retorts.
LOL LOL that was so hilarious.
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Tezuka is in denial *nods*
hahah, thank you! glad u liked it <3
and yeah, I wanted to make them bickering a little so I made that little dialogue XD;;
glad u liked it x3
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