[Fic--TezuFuji] To Define

Apr 20, 2008 08:11

Title: To Define
Author: a1y-puff
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters: friendship Tezuka/Fuji, (yes, friendship only)
Prompt: #26. Smirk
Genre: general/friendship
Word Count: 1057
Rating: G
Summary: Even Tezuka has his wonders. One of them is Fuji Shuusuke.
Warnings: randomness alert!
Disclaimer: PoT belongs to Konomi-sensei. Tezuka and Fuji belong to ( Read more... )

challenge, fanfiction, 50scenes, tezukafuji, tenipuri

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reader_a April 20 2008, 05:54:12 UTC
lovely darling.
Tezuka as 14, I think you might have captured that.
He really seems to be a thinker, I just missed something - I dont know what it is yet. But over all, really cute *hugs* Good job.

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a1y_puff April 20 2008, 08:28:48 UTC
Thank you!! glad you think I captured it well enough ^^
and if you find anything you think is missing, pelase do tell me :)
and thanks a lot *hugs back*

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vierblith_tefu April 20 2008, 07:05:40 UTC
Of course soulmate can have romantic connotations.
Write more fics soon! :D

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a1y_puff April 20 2008, 08:24:58 UTC
well, soulmate does have romantic connotations. exactly why Tezuka didn't want to use that word (yet) XD;;;
thanks for reading!! I;ll write more soon i guess x3

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tacuma811 April 20 2008, 13:07:47 UTC
That was really cute! You really did well! You wrote friendship between Tezuka and Fuji! Must have been difficult XD I love it how Fuji calls when he is in front of Tezuka's house XD XD

Btw, Tezuka is like a 14-year-old in this fic, but in some parts he is still a bit like an older boy.

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a1y_puff April 20 2008, 13:20:08 UTC
thank you!! glad u liked it <3
Hahah, it wasn't really difficult, the plot bunnies were jumping at me like mad that I had to wrote it down on paper, remember? XD:;

and yeah, I think that's the most fourteen-years-old like Tezuka can do... he acts waaaay too mature than he should've been after all XDD
glad u liked it tho *glomps*

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tacuma811 April 20 2008, 14:53:41 UTC
Haha you found a lot of plotbunnies, ne? You write so much! ^__^

I like Tezuka because he acts more mature than he is XD But you did a good job. He feels more like a 14-year-old boy in your fic. I want to say that it is kinda cute, but 'cute' isn't really a word that would describe Tezuka XD

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a1y_puff April 20 2008, 15:14:51 UTC
I didn't find the,. they found me XD;;

Yeah, indeed, that's just the way Tezuka is ne? mature :3
and well I dunno what to call Tezuka, but cute is quite an appropriate word for him... for now XDDD

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chibikaoruchan April 20 2008, 18:31:31 UTC
Waaah It's so cute!! ^-^ I love it that they have that unspoken connection =D

Sentences of the day: “Don’t frown, Tezuka. You look old enough even without frowning,”

“and you look feminine enough even without that too-sweet smile of yours,”

Thank you!! <3

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a1y_puff April 23 2008, 05:29:38 UTC
thanks for reading!!! I'm glad u liked it <33

and hahah, I just want to see them bickering a little so I wrote those lines XD;;

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enasniyllagel April 20 2008, 18:36:53 UTC
Tezuka the word for Fuji is soulmate, SOULMATE!!!
Lol, really good perspective of friend!Tezuka/Fuji.

“Don’t frown, Tezuka. You look old enough even without frowning,” Fuji teases him yet again.
Tezuka smirks, “and you look feminine enough even without that too-sweet smile of yours,” he retorts.
LOL LOL that was so hilarious.

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a1y_puff April 23 2008, 05:34:13 UTC
Yeah, it's SOULMATE!! XDDD
Tezuka is in denial *nods*
hahah, thank you! glad u liked it <3

and yeah, I wanted to make them bickering a little so I made that little dialogue XD;;
glad u liked it x3

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