Comments | _turtledove: Her Father's Daughter

_turtledove

Apr 05, 2006 16:55

Title: Her Father's Daughter
Fandom: Firefly
Genre: Genfic
Rating: PG
Summary: A little girl and her mother around town.
Author's Notes: Written for the everyfiveyears challenge. Many thanks to bgeezus for her beta skills.

( Her father loved her with the same detached passion he reserved for his merchant goods - the rare teak, mahogany and blackthorn woods that were in such great demand in the city - as though he couldn’t bear to part and be rid of her soon enough. )

Comments 10

carlyinrome April 6 2006, 23:26:56 UTC

That was exceptionally clever, befitting your subject. Very nice work.

_turtledove April 9 2006, 17:15:21 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :D

bgeezus April 6 2006, 23:53:54 UTC

=)!!

_turtledove April 19 2006, 05:12:21 UTC

faith_less_one April 12 2006, 17:47:59 UTC

Saffron!

A slut from age 5, eh? I should have guessed it.

_turtledove April 12 2006, 18:35:56 UTC

She's always been awful friendly, that one. Before she attempts to rob you, anway. ;)

ana_grrl April 13 2006, 01:59:06 UTC

Oh, I really like this. Intriguing Saffon back-story. Thank you!

_turtledove April 13 2006, 03:59:57 UTC

Thanks! :) She's a character I love to hate, but I've found to be quite fun to write.

meloradhahm April 18 2006, 09:01:06 UTC

Wow! We all knew she had a talent for what she does, but I didn't realize it started that young!

This was terrific!

_turtledove April 19 2006, 05:12:00 UTC

Hee, thank you!

It was too easy to imagine a wee!Saffron as a bit of a flirt. :D