Comments | _toxic_eden: One Last, With You

_toxic_eden

One Last, With You

Apr 20, 2006 12:48

Pairing: Lily Evans/Narcissa Black
Rating: R
Words: 1636
Notes: Written for hp_girlslash's Springtime Seduction Challenge 2006.
Summary: After it's over, Narcissa can't help but seek Lily out, one last time.

( Meet me. You know where. )

girlsex, springtime seduction challenge, hp_girlslash, lily/narcissa

Comments 10

pit_chick666 April 21 2006, 19:55:24 UTC

goddamn james potter! *shakes fist angrily* so sad, but so beautiful!

ginevieve April 23 2006, 20:26:31 UTC

Silly Potter, doesn't he realize he's ruined one of our hottest girlslash relationships? ;D

Thanks so much; I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

And your icon is ridiculously sexy.

pit_chick666 April 24 2006, 19:14:30 UTC

Thanks.Bettie Page is my personal Goddess

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ginevieve April 23 2006, 20:34:25 UTC

*is speechless*

Wow, I'm not sure how to even begin to thank you for your review.

Regarding unfaithful fics, I agree with you entirely. Especially in terms of James and Lily, as James worked so hard to finally win her affections. I just can't picture her throwing that all away. Even though Narcissa is very lovely and convincing. ;)

Strangely enough, I base my Lily off a very dear friend of mine, although I don't think I've ever told her as much. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my interpretation of her; I generally try to avoid writing Lily's perspective, as I feel like I just can't do her justice.

*melts* I just can't thank you enough for your kind words. ♥

seraphina_snape April 21 2006, 22:52:30 UTC

The first HP fic I've read in ages, and it's such a beautiful, wonderful story. Sure, I want to throttle Potter, but I have that feeling all the time...

I really like the way you just sort of hit us over the head with it. I love James. I mean, damnit. I'm not even coherent.

~ sera

ginevieve April 23 2006, 20:45:15 UTC

*grin* Thank you so much, Sera, I'm so glad you liked it. And it's the first HP fic I've written in ages, so at least we're on the same footing.

I'm so blown away that the ending left you speechless. I just couldn't see Lily being anything but blunt with Narcissa, as that's always how Narcissa was with Lily. :)

Thank you for reading!

skylar_peat April 23 2006, 10:16:50 UTC

no way no way no way no way no way!

The ending was amazing, woman! Lily really stood up for herself, letting Cissa know what's right. Go girl!

xx

ginevieve April 23 2006, 20:48:38 UTC

Thanks so much, love!

Even though I adore Lily/Narcissa, I just couldn't make her leave James. :( I always saw her as the more faithful one, as opposed to Narcissa.

♥

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ginevieve April 29 2006, 23:57:23 UTC

*hugs you and doesn't let go*

Darling, I do believe this is the Lily/Narcissa that I promised to write you ages ago. So, for you, ma cher. Gah, I'm so ridiculously pleased you read it. *is melty*