I love the rhythmic quality of this...very nice, indeed! You got right into her head, but not in the way that over explains everything...it's like omnipotent, but not first-person here's-verbatim-everything-that-the-character's-thinking because that easily can sound less like getting into a character's brain and more like trying to be smart.
Anyway, I suck at commenting coherently. It was very nice and I love Cuddy and hate the name Lisa and think you are a lovely writer.
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Anyway, I suck at commenting coherently. It was very nice and I love Cuddy and hate the name Lisa and think you are a lovely writer.
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