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Sep 10, 2006 22:47

Title: A Firecracker Sort of Love
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1115
A/N: 10th post!!! w00t!!! Anyways, I dedicate this to all the people who commented ever on any of my stories. Thank you sincerely.

You find him slumped over the bar and he was clinging onto it for dear life. You approach the bar and the bartender looks at you, relieved.

"He's a sleeping ( Read more... )

author: b, genre: fluff, rating: pg, length: oneshot, genre: romance

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s7nluv September 11 2006, 03:08:06 UTC
aww...jaemin kutenes...i like the last line...everything about his juss creates a light fluffy feeling that i haven't felt in a long time...great job!

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beautifulburn September 11 2006, 21:47:03 UTC
Heehee... I live to make the fluffies... Thank you for reading~

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x_voracity September 11 2006, 03:49:35 UTC
OMG wow. ♥ I adored that. It wasn't like perfect romantic - more realistic - and because of that I loved the line :
Until he has to go and throw up in the bushes behind the swing set.
And the ending, just lovely without overdoing it :)

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beautifulburn September 11 2006, 21:47:50 UTC
I find that I can't do the hardcore romance very well... At least some people enjoy my little spin on it!

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x_voracity September 12 2006, 01:01:11 UTC
I think this piece was better as NOT being a hardcore roamance - and I think that's why I liked it so much :D It was really beautiful but not in that romantic-omg-throw-them-a-honeymoon way.

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beautifulburn September 12 2006, 01:56:23 UTC
To tell you the truth, I don't think I would even know where to go if it was a hardcore romance... I'm glad people like the result of this one as not being overly romantic... Thank you for liking~

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alohdark September 11 2006, 05:47:31 UTC
Aww! SO CUTE!! *giggles* I love the imagry (>.< Sorry I can't spell right now...) of ChangMin drunk. Tehe! ^_^

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beautifulburn September 11 2006, 21:48:41 UTC
Changmin drunk was fun to think about~ XD

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alohdark September 11 2006, 22:21:46 UTC
HAHAHA I can imagine him poking people in the cheeks a lot, and being all snuggly and stressing random vowels while drunk. XD HAHA I'd *love* to see that. XD HAHA And moving his mouth more than nessary while talking. I can tottally imagine it. XD HAHA

*is slain again by the sexy ChangMin icon*

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beautifulburn September 11 2006, 22:25:40 UTC
Wow, the use of that icon was not intentional... :blink: 8X I would loev to have a drink with Changmin, you know, just load him up on alcohol and see what he does. And videotape it. And put it up on my favorite site evar: YouTube.

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vindemi September 11 2006, 09:30:19 UTC
Im inlove with this T_T

coughiwannareadmorecough

=x

yeap the ending is lovely <33 that's the word XDD

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beautifulburn September 11 2006, 21:49:30 UTC
But... :whine:There is no more...:whine: D: I'm sorry! :runs away and hides:

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minnteh September 11 2006, 13:31:20 UTC
I flail. <3 I adore your fics and pounce on every single one of them. *_*

I really like drunk!min. XD I always thought he'd be the type. Whereas Yunho would be the ranty!drunk. Meke would be an emo!drunk. jsdkgjskd Oh dear. I keep getting strange mental images now 8DDD

TY for writing, and I hope to see more~~ <3

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beautifulburn September 11 2006, 22:15:07 UTC
Ah, drunk!min... The joy o' life... XD

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awesome September 12 2006, 16:41:51 UTC
You know, I always fail at writing drunk!min. XD I tried twice, and it always ended up in angst, so I tossed them all into the figurative bin. XD;; WRITE MORE. *annoys you into submission!!1!1!* <3

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