[Fic] Two Hearts

Jul 27, 2008 14:28

Cross-posted to hug______

Title: Two Hearts
Genre: Angst/Romance
Length: One-shot
Pairing: Jaemin
Rated: R
Summary: Changmin thinks love is truly knowing someone. Jaejoong thinks it’s still wanting to be with each other.

Two Hearts )

author: t, rating: r, genre: humor, genre: angst, length: oneshot

Leave a comment

Comments 29

yuxo July 27 2008, 23:16:44 UTC
That is incredible. *______________*

You tell Changmin to confess to his girl.

He looks at you with the calmest eyes you’ve ever seen and says, “I won’t let you run away.”

Two days later, he breaks up with her instead.

Marriage and children, a happy family. You wanted those things and although low voices and warm touches with a rough hand could be nice, there weren’t things you were willing to sacrifice. You wanted to sit together at the dinning table and eat together with your wife and kids, put shining lamps in every room of your house until it glowed like heaven.Couldn't pick my favorite section so there's both! 8D ( ... )

Reply

twhitesakura July 29 2008, 05:57:18 UTC
Thank you for reading and reviewing! It's feedback like yours that keeps me writing. Honestly, I was wondering if people would like this fic and then your comment popped up. ♥

Hmm... I think the Changmin fans see is real. We just don't see everything (like when DBSK gets angry or feel insecure). But most people are like that too. You just have to get to know them. =D

Reply


samikitty July 28 2008, 00:52:05 UTC
“I love you,” Changmin says. “Why can’t I be with you?”

and

“Your kisses count,” Changmin interrupts your rambling.

ahhhhh~~~ *O*

it'll be okay for the JaeMin couple~~~ at least they're messed up together, right? ^O^;;; thanks for writing and sharing!!

Reply

twhitesakura July 29 2008, 06:00:32 UTC
Well, they might think they're messed up, but I just see two people beautifully in love. So yeah, I think they'll be okay. Thanks! ^_^

Reply


temptingtruth July 28 2008, 04:19:36 UTC
OMGG, the last few parts were really written =.=
ACKK, I really feel like screaming here. This was really great T________T

Reply

twhitesakura July 29 2008, 06:01:49 UTC
Well, I hope you liked the whole fic in general. XD And thank you! ♥

Reply


roselit July 28 2008, 05:16:25 UTC
this was absolutely amazing. *__*! i loved reading the entire thing~
the emotion you feel, the feeling.. it's all so a;lsjf;dsf. ♥♥

amazing job! :D i loved this a lot!

Reply

twhitesakura July 29 2008, 06:02:42 UTC
*glows from your praise* Thank you! ♥

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

twhitesakura July 29 2008, 06:03:48 UTC
*does dance* It's always the ultimate compliment when someone mems your fic. Thank you!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up