[fic] The Perfect Life

[changmin_nie]

Title: The Perfect Life
Lenght: Prologue :D
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Comments

[sly_pantera]

Haha, go play FFXII then. You should. The game is ajfhsalkf amazing (to me). I played it so much I beat it far too quickly, and now I have nothing to play. -___-

Anyways. *wibbles* It's really sort of bittersweet. I can't wait for the next chapter!

[changmin_nie]

XDDD Yeah I should. But I hate Mateus, he/she? so hard to beat <<". My Guys are too weak I think ;o;.
I like the Game, too! But to make the Charas stonger is so boring. You had to level up a lot in the Game. -___- xD"

Yeah, kind of xD <33 It will be up soon..I hope xD"

[sly_pantera]

Yeah, Mateus was hard for me to. I can't really remember how I beat her; there was a lot of luck involved. Do your have quickenings? Because I remember spamming like crazy on those, mostly because I was far too tired to level up. >.> Usually, when you enter a new area, you have to gain about 5+ levels to even think about fighting the enemies. It's tough. Why don't you try going on hunts? Those always help.

And make sure to have your lead character equipped with the Thief's Cuffs so that you can steal from all your enemies. Stealing is the number 1 way to get gil, and then with your gil you can buy new armor, or magic or whatever, ne?

If you still need more help, go to gamefaqs.com and you can look at walkthroughs for the game. ^____^

[changmin_nie]

thank you! XDDD
now I will surely beat him the next time I'll play!
*kicks mateus*

[theresa_lynne]

Awww. Poor Minnie-min-min. You'll make sure he's not too sad, right? You love your Min, right? You wouldn't intentionally hurt him. :P *hugs*

[changmin_nie]

*runs in circles*
No! Yes..! no, no..yes! Ehhh~!
Of Course our Min will get a Happy End!! I will never, never hurt Min XD! Maybe a little bit? just a liiiiiitle bit! *hides*
*runs out again* *hugs back* *hides again*

[theresa_lynne]

Wow. That's what you call hyperactive. ^^;;;

But you are some kind of cute. *pinches cheeks and cuddles*

[changmin_nie]

I'm sorry! xD
I was a little bit too excited. <3

[storm_sight]

Loved it, and can't wait to see how this turns out! However, can I make one little comment on the technical aspect of the writing? Your capitalization was odd. For example "A few Months later, you finally will tell your Family that you Love a Man and life with him since a few Months now." The words love, man, months and family shouldn't really be capitalized. I can see where you might be trying to come from, to place emphasis on certain words, but all of this capitalization is a bit excessive, and distracting. But other than that, I loved everything! It's just a small thing, and really what can I say, your the author, so its ultimately up to you how you want to write. =) (I'm not trying to be mean or anything here, just trying to point out something that you or your beta might have missed- please don't be mad!*_*)

[changmin_nie]

xD no, no it's ok!
I thank you for that! Now, I know..I should mark it in another way Oo"
And...I don't have a beta XD" That's my little problem.
anyway...really, thank you!

[chloe1910]

I agree.. Basically the story line is rather interesting but the grammar part of it is a little odd...