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perriwynkkle in _starcandy

Innocence of Seduction (Chapter Four)

Jul 27, 2007 00:07

Title: The Innocence of Seduction ( Read more... )

author: p, rating: pg13, length: chaptered, genre: romance

Comments 18

theresa_lynne July 27 2007, 07:41:12 UTC

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This chapter was awesome. I can't wait to see the outcome of this story. :DDDDD If it is definitely going the way I am thinking and want... I am going to love this even more. :P

“Yoochun, how can you be so perky in the morning?”
Yoochun shrugged, “Genetics?”
Changmin groaned, “Your kind of people shouldn’t breed.” He said, turning back around to disappear into the washroom.
That made me die laughing. Haha. <3

perriwynkkle July 28 2007, 00:27:13 UTC

Thanks for reading! YAY, I am so glad you liked it! The ending was a fun little part I decided to add in, since humor is always the best!

_pockygirl July 27 2007, 08:20:48 UTC

i loved jaejoong and changmin's scene<3 jaemin!! ;D so cheeky how changmin stands in his infamous pose xD

can't wait for the next chapter haha micky xD such a happy boy

perriwynkkle July 28 2007, 00:27:46 UTC

Jaejoong and Changmin was a very fun scene to write! Come back for the next chapter! Thanks for reading!

enchanted1312 July 27 2007, 11:46:11 UTC

aww, i think seriously, min had done his job. i'm proud of him lol. but i really liked the morning part, when changmin said that he would always worry abt Yunho's health, in a way, i could imagine them standing in the kitchen, talkign to each other, the sunlight reflecting their faces, omg, now i'm getting really romantic. adn not to mention the hot kisses. o.O

perriwynkkle July 28 2007, 00:28:47 UTC

You just described the way I felt when I was writing this chapter. I tried to make it seem like it would all be natural for this to happen in their day to day excursions that we as fans do not see. Hot kisses always make scenes fun to write. LOL!

figmagination July 27 2007, 13:34:52 UTC

This chapter was so awesome ( ... )

perriwynkkle July 28 2007, 00:29:40 UTC

YAY, I am so happy with your comment, you made my day! Thanks for all the nice compliments! I will try and get another chapter out tonight for you all!

yummyfruit July 27 2007, 22:34:52 UTC

haha. omg. now jaeho can know that changmin is also caring for them.

perriwynkkle July 28 2007, 00:30:02 UTC

Yes, yes, Changmin is starting to show his caring and loving side!

yummyfruit July 28 2007, 03:25:23 UTC

i bet jaeho will tie up minnie and have revenge like you're icon. lol.

perriwynkkle July 28 2007, 17:17:53 UTC

Ooooo, that is an idea. *the hampster wheel turns*

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