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May 07, 2004 22:25

you can't survive
without a heartbeat
well mine shattered
into a million GAZILLION
pieces &&& my cheek
is against cold concrete
now as they madly
search for duct tape
&&& krazy glue &&&
bubble gum ignoring
the neon sign on
my torn tee shirt
reading i'm gone
&&& they just say
you're still bleeding we
can see the stains
forming on your sweater&&& ( Read more... )

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themanicdude May 7 2004, 14:43:55 UTC
You poem was amazing, it's beautiful because it's true

luv Lee X

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_rockromance May 7 2004, 14:52:00 UTC
thanks!

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_synder_hella_ May 7 2004, 15:02:15 UTC
i want me some real wings.

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yayitslees May 7 2004, 15:23:09 UTC
you write good poems, just to let ya know

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_rockromance May 7 2004, 15:26:53 UTC
thanks

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pink_terantulas May 9 2004, 22:11:15 UTC
nice

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