observing the unseen/unwilling

Mar 21, 2005 22:01

like a painting
deep hair.
brown eyes,perfect
pastel skin.
freckles, or was that
just the age of the
photo?
it's been awhile since we've talked.
but your brown eyes have met with
my green eyes.
[we'd never admit too it]
youseerightthrough
me.

recently i've been on a writing roll.
the block has moved.
i'd like some feedback.
from anyone/everyone who reads it, whatever.
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