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[_p0etictragedy_]

Hot tears stain cheeks

Comments

[dancingnthrain]

amazing susana.. simply amazing.. i especially love the line ab splotchy roads... great imagery there.. i love you susana!

[_p0etictragedy_]

why thank you lorilana,i love you toooo, and your poems rock my eyebrows off!

[dancingnthrain]

i would hope that they wouldnt rock your eyebrows off... because then you would look like mona lisa. did you know that it used to be fashionable not to have eyebrows and so they would shave them off.. so yea thats the fun fact for the day.

[_p0etictragedy_]

trappers question: "what famous painting depicts a person with no eyebrows?" ohh it'd be great

from Mrs Baldwin

[anonymous]

another really good poem. LA teachers are missing out on what their students are producing on these LJ's- you guys are coming up with terrific work. Susan, I think you need to work on publishing this one. There are tons of writing contests on-line and we have a book about it too. Ask Lori, she can lend it to you. IF you get serious about it, tell me, if you want, I can help you tweak it some more. MRs. B.

[lastxlullaby]

Writing contests? very nice. susana could so win! lori dearest, if you would be so kind as to send me some stuff too i'd love you forever... even tho i already do... but... you know what i mean. you're my honorary sister after all, you and that lovely lisa.